Arctic Adventure
December 28th-29th very cloudy
Dear Diary:
I woke up and walked to my computer to check the weather today. When I checked it, it was fine so I took my gear and walked outside the door but this time I walked the other direction then the other days hoping there is going to be something new. I found two birds and a "an" egg I thought maybe this would be my next to research because nothing I can see around here. But when I was looking around the place I saw a pile of snow and it was moving I thought I was just illuminating nice word! so I did not care. When I was just about to study a white fox came and ate all of the birds and the egg and then I realised that with "will" be my next research.
It was get a bit late so I walked back home once I got to the house I went on my computer and studied more a few hours have past and I found out what it is called. It is called the Arctic fox need a comma here it eats lemmings young birds and eggs they also change colour dewing "during" winter and summer, they are pure white in winter and brown in summer.
It was getting dark so I went to bed and dreamed about what I am going to see nexted. same as before, it's "next", nexted is not a word
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Another great chapter, I liked the change in story beginning of checking the computer first before leaving, as well as the detailed descriptions of the Arctic Fox. 8 out of 10]
Dear Diary:
I woke up and walked to my computer to check the weather today. When I checked it, it was fine so I took my gear and walked outside the door but this time I walked the other direction then the other days hoping there is going to be something new. I found two birds and a "an" egg I thought maybe this would be my next to research because nothing I can see around here. But when I was looking around the place I saw a pile of snow and it was moving I thought I was just illuminating nice word! so I did not care. When I was just about to study a white fox came and ate all of the birds and the egg and then I realised that with "will" be my next research.
It was get a bit late so I walked back home once I got to the house I went on my computer and studied more a few hours have past and I found out what it is called. It is called the Arctic fox need a comma here it eats lemmings young birds and eggs they also change colour dewing "during" winter and summer, they are pure white in winter and brown in summer.
It was getting dark so I went to bed and dreamed about what I am going to see nexted. same as before, it's "next", nexted is not a word
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Another great chapter, I liked the change in story beginning of checking the computer first before leaving, as well as the detailed descriptions of the Arctic Fox. 8 out of 10]