Infinite Cheesecake
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Lackofmop |
Jun 30, 2013 | This is ok | |
Zac6251 |
Apr 26, 2010 | ||
Storywriter |
Nov 4, 2009 | Pretty gay. | |
Alejate |
Jun 11, 2008 | I haven't gone past the first page so I won't rate this story yet. You've given us four names, and asked us to take a pick. How can we make an intelligent decision if we don't know what to base our decisions on? The readers don't know anything about these characters. Will it be a matter of dumb luck then? CYOA readers, I assume, enjoy having to think things through before making a decision. I suppose it'll be better if you give us a little background on these four stooges before you ask us to pick who to date, or whatever. | |
Leblanc4prez |
Apr 28, 2008 | Good work... I need some cheesecake! |