Faridell

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shuttlesworth50
shuttlesworth50
Jan 16, 2009
Although I am a great fan of fantasy stories, I feel that this story lacked fulness. It was well written throughout the creator's pages with a smattering of misspelled words.

I feel like there should be a bit more description of the surroundings (which makes the fantasy genre appealing) and more rooms to explore.
by shuttlesworth50 on Jan 16, 2009
dfalan
dfalan
Nov 11, 2008
by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Thiefswipe
Thiefswipe
Jan 7, 2008
hmm, good story, but are yo going to fnish it? thereare a whole bunch of unfinished stories lying around infinate! Good luck and all that!
by Thiefswipe on Jan 7, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis
Jun 1, 2007
Decent but pales in comparison to some other stories of this genre.
by apotheosis on Jun 1, 2007
SirOwnU
SirOwnU
May 31, 2006
Help me come up with monster names, by SirOwnU
by SirOwnU on May 31, 2006
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 13, 2005
Spelling errors aside, I couldn't stop myself from thinking, "Zentrum: more complete from mage to shrink!" Yes, I realize no one will possibly ever get that, but I had to do it.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 13, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Aug 12, 2005
Excellent story. Only problem is that there seem to be too many "The End"'s throughout the story. It shouldn't always have to be there's "only one good path" type of thing.

Oh, and did those guys actualy just say Kudoz? Who says that? Tadow!
by donteatpoop on Aug 12, 2005
YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Jul 5, 2005
Probably one of the best fantasy/adventure stories on the site.
by YazZMaN on Jul 5, 2005
ZavuSilverlight
ZavuSilverlight
Feb 19, 2005
Sheer brilliance. Kudos to you.
by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
Futurecastsgirl
Futurecastsgirl
Jan 30, 2005
Well done uuu!
by Futurecastsgirl on Jan 30, 2005
TheKoolAidGuy
TheKoolAidGuy
Dec 20, 2004
My favourite story on this website. Kudos.
by TheKoolAidGuy on Dec 20, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Nov 5, 2004
The best classic there is, plain and simple.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004

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