Arctic Adventure
January 11th-12th normal
Dear Diary:
It was almost the end of the holiday research thing "thing" is a bit casual, just say "research trip" I signed up for. Today I want to find some walruses some of the things what does this "some of the things" mean? already now was the males have big tusk bigger than females, they are huge, they grow to 3.6 meters long and that that was it so I wanted to find some walruses. I walked outside and looked on my map I found in my draw "drawer" (the word you used means to make a picture) so I know where to find the walruses so this time I was going straight not left or right. Once I was a quarter away from the place to see walruses I saw a lot of foot steps "footsteps" heading the same why I was going and I new "knew" it was from a walrus so I followed the foot steps "footsteps" to the area where I can find walruses. Once I got there I did I think you mean "didn't"? really go close to on "one" because they will attacked no "ed" you. I saw one eating a crab, sea urchin, a clam and a mussel. So I wrote it in the book I am writing in now. I couldn't go close so I can't research about them so I went back to the my home and worked for 10 hours straight.
I got tried very tried so I slept almost instantly.
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Good use of walrus facts from the booklet I gave you, but this chapter felt a bit rushed, with quite a few spelling errors and some sentences no making sense. 7 out of 10]
Dear Diary:
It was almost the end of the holiday research thing "thing" is a bit casual, just say "research trip" I signed up for. Today I want to find some walruses some of the things what does this "some of the things" mean? already now was the males have big tusk bigger than females, they are huge, they grow to 3.6 meters long and that that was it so I wanted to find some walruses. I walked outside and looked on my map I found in my draw "drawer" (the word you used means to make a picture) so I know where to find the walruses so this time I was going straight not left or right. Once I was a quarter away from the place to see walruses I saw a lot of foot steps "footsteps" heading the same why I was going and I new "knew" it was from a walrus so I followed the foot steps "footsteps" to the area where I can find walruses. Once I got there I did I think you mean "didn't"? really go close to on "one" because they will attacked no "ed" you. I saw one eating a crab, sea urchin, a clam and a mussel. So I wrote it in the book I am writing in now. I couldn't go close so I can't research about them so I went back to the my home and worked for 10 hours straight.
I got tried very tried so I slept almost instantly.
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Good use of walrus facts from the booklet I gave you, but this chapter felt a bit rushed, with quite a few spelling errors and some sentences no making sense. 7 out of 10]