Comments & Ratings
||Apr 23, 2012||so annoying it says i do not have writing privilages !!!!!!!!!!!!|
||Oct 9, 2011||One of the better collaborative efforts on this site. Too bad Morathi and NCPolice aren't still around.|
||May 3, 2010||incredible story. 10!!!|
||Apr 23, 2006||Great job guys. This is most deserving of being recognized as one of the sites top stories. I looks like everyone involved did the research to get the feel right and wrote nice long rooms full of description and flavor. I would love to see more of it worked on and finished (if that will ever happen) but what is there now is well deserving of praise.|
||Aug 12, 2005||
Loved the story, loved the work. Another grand slam for Morathi (and friends).|
Didn't like the spelling errors and brevity, however. This is something that DEFINITELY should've been worked on more recently than December '03.
||Jul 21, 2005||
You guys did your homework. I'm tempted to dock you a point for some minor grammatical errors on NCPolice's part, but that would be petty.|
The action and suspense that keep the reader interested far outweigh the discrepancies. Well done!
It's too bad it's met the fate of so many other stories and hasn't been finished, though. ):
||Jul 5, 2005||Wow, very good especially for being a group story.|
||Jun 29, 2005||Very good story. Good premise, good execution. There's a few typos, but fantastic story overall.|
||May 23, 2005|
||Nov 5, 2004||Bravo!!! A great group effort! I hope I could be included in your next story!!!|