Revenge of the Ronin

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Author Rating Date Comment
marcussi
marcussi
Apr 23, 2012
so annoying it says i do not have writing privilages !!!!!!!!!!!!
by marcussi on Apr 23, 2012
EndMaster
EndMaster
Oct 9, 2011
One of the better collaborative efforts on this site. Too bad Morathi and NCPolice aren't still around.
by EndMaster on Oct 9, 2011
silentninja
silentninja
May 3, 2010
incredible story. 10!!!
by silentninja on May 3, 2010
dragavan
dragavan
Apr 23, 2006
Great job guys. This is most deserving of being recognized as one of the sites top stories. I looks like everyone involved did the research to get the feel right and wrote nice long rooms full of description and flavor. I would love to see more of it worked on and finished (if that will ever happen) but what is there now is well deserving of praise.
by dragavan on Apr 23, 2006
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 12, 2005
Loved the story, loved the work. Another grand slam for Morathi (and friends).

Didn't like the spelling errors and brevity, however. This is something that DEFINITELY should've been worked on more recently than December '03.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 12, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
Jul 21, 2005
You guys did your homework. I'm tempted to dock you a point for some minor grammatical errors on NCPolice's part, but that would be petty.

The action and suspense that keep the reader interested far outweigh the discrepancies. Well done!

It's too bad it's met the fate of so many other stories and hasn't been finished, though. ):
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 21, 2005
YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Jul 5, 2005
Wow, very good especially for being a group story.
by YazZMaN on Jul 5, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jun 29, 2005
Very good story. Good premise, good execution. There's a few typos, but fantastic story overall.
by donteatpoop on Jun 29, 2005
Alas
Alas
May 23, 2005
by Alas on May 23, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Nov 5, 2004
Bravo!!! A great group effort! I hope I could be included in your next story!!!
by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004

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