Revenge of the Ronin

Written by CYOAWritersGuild / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
TJP623		Feb 1, 2022	Unfinished by TJP623 on Feb 1, 2022
marcussi		Apr 23, 2012	so annoying it says i do not have writing privilages !!!!!!!!!!!! by marcussi on Apr 23, 2012
EndMaster		Oct 9, 2011	One of the better collaborative efforts on this site. Too bad Morathi and NCPolice aren't still around. by EndMaster on Oct 9, 2011
silentninja		May 3, 2010	incredible story. 10!!! by silentninja on May 3, 2010
dragavan		Apr 23, 2006	Great job guys. This is most deserving of being recognized as one of the sites top stories. I looks like everyone involved did the research to get the feel right and wrote nice long rooms full of description and flavor. I would love to see more of it worked on and finished (if that will ever happen) but what is there now is well deserving of praise. by dragavan on Apr 23, 2006
michaelrayholt		Aug 12, 2005	Loved the story, loved the work. Another grand slam for Morathi (and friends). Didn't like the spelling errors and brevity, however. This is something that DEFINITELY should've been worked on more recently than December '03. by michaelrayholt on Aug 12, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby		Jul 21, 2005	You guys did your homework. I'm tempted to dock you a point for some minor grammatical errors on NCPolice's part, but that would be petty. The action and suspense that keep the reader interested far outweigh the discrepancies. Well done! It's too bad it's met the fate of so many other stories and hasn't been finished, though. ): by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 21, 2005
YazZMaN		Jul 5, 2005	Wow, very good especially for being a group story. by YazZMaN on Jul 5, 2005
donteatpoop		Jun 29, 2005	Very good story. Good premise, good execution. There's a few typos, but fantastic story overall. by donteatpoop on Jun 29, 2005
Alas		May 23, 2005	by Alas on May 23, 2005
jeffisthebest		Nov 5, 2004	Bravo!!! A great group effort! I hope I could be included in your next story!!! by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004