From Darkness It Comes

Written by dragavan / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Thickskullman	Jul 13, 2013	by Thickskullman on Jul 13, 2013
Souvarine	Nov 9, 2010	Quality story and quality writing. However, the story felt a bit linear, except with optional detours that always seemed to deposit you back on the path. There were also some inconsistencies in the story. So, I would give 9 for the story, but only 7 for usage of the infinite-story engine, averaging out to 8. by Souvarine on Nov 9, 2010
pastasoup	May 23, 2009	by pastasoup on May 23, 2009
Cat2000	Aug 9, 2008	I haven't completed this yet, but just wanted to say that this has been an exceedingly enjoyable read so far. The characters are interesting and engaging, and the plot is awesome. Great work on this! by Cat2000 on Aug 9, 2008
EndMaster	Sep 15, 2007	by EndMaster on Sep 15, 2007
Vesnicie	Jun 24, 2007	I read this one months ago, and quite frankly I don't have the energy for it again, but I'm currently on a "go-back-and-rate-deserving-stories" kick to try to mitigate the effects of random 5's left by random users with not so much as an explanation. From what I remember...pushing aside the cobwebs...this story put in a lot of attention to detail and sensory description, which is something I always like to see. I admit, I am partial to this sort of style. I too found myself intrigued and pulled in and was sorely disappointed when I came up against an unfinished ending, even if the "ending" was told in the beginning. The first page of the story seemed a little too histrionic to me right off the bat, but I'm not going to dock you for this since it makes sense within your framework. In other words: ten. by Vesnicie on Jun 24, 2007
apotheosis	Mar 17, 2007	What else could I rate this? by apotheosis on Mar 17, 2007
P13B01	Mar 11, 2007	The amount of work that you put into this story...sensational. Congratulations! by P13B01 on Mar 11, 2007
Vash	Feb 23, 2007	Compelling. A page turner. You want to find out what happens next! by Vash on Feb 23, 2007
Cab	Aug 27, 2006	by Cab on Aug 27, 2006
lullaby	Jun 2, 2006	It's an amazing piece of work, and I wouldn't be surprised if it was made into a film. I can't wait for it to finish. by lullaby on Jun 2, 2006
druidwolf	Mar 17, 2006	With the exception of a few typos this is an incredibly engaging and well thought out story. I look forward to seeing more. by druidwolf on Mar 17, 2006
katieisland	Feb 27, 2006	I can't wait until it's complete Mr. da Vinci... it will be a masterpiece. by katieisland on Feb 27, 2006
FreeThinkingAsshole	Jan 30, 2006	Don't really like the opening page, but the rest of it is fantastic! And OldManHiggins, quit being such an ass. by FreeThinkingAsshole on Jan 30, 2006
JohnJohnson	Jan 25, 2006	That wasn't very nice, Old Man Higgins. You're right though, the writing is deplorable. by JohnJohnson on Jan 25, 2006
OldManHiggins	Jan 21, 2006	Horrible! I hate it! I hate everything! by OldManHiggins on Jan 21, 2006
YazZMaN	Nov 16, 2005	You did an excellent job with this story, not short of great. It has a lot of freedom, changes in the story mood, and it has spectacular detail. In my opinion, this is in this website's top 3 stories at least. (I noticed a few grammaer/spelling errors)e but the story was so good that I coudn't dock any points for them. by YazZMaN on Nov 16, 2005
Amalek	Nov 14, 2005	Put simply excellent story telling. Very visual and makes the reader wanting to know what happens next. by Amalek on Nov 14, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Oct 2, 2005	What can I say. I like it, but something kept me from giving it a ten. Great story, though. It's put together very vividly. Whatever that means. I'm going to drink beer now. Cheerio. by ChubbyTeletubby on Oct 2, 2005
donteatpoop	May 26, 2005	Very well written. Gretly enjoyed it. Just wish I had more time to read it. by donteatpoop on May 26, 2005
michaelrayholt	Apr 6, 2005	Excellent writing. The best I've seen so far, except possibly Morathi, if I remember correctly. This would be a ten were it not for the four spelling/English errors I found on your first non-introductory page. Keep up the good work, though. I look forward to seeing more. by michaelrayholt on Apr 6, 2005
jeffisthebest	Jan 21, 2005	Amazing. Exceptional writing. That was truly good writing. Anything less than a 10 is crazy. One of my top 10 stories. I'm going to have to say #4, maybe. by jeffisthebest on Jan 21, 2005

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