The Uplink World

Written by AnthonyS / NR: Not Rated / 6.00 (5 ratings) (5)
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Author Rating Date Comment
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Jan 21, 2006
Gree with YazZ.
by jeffisthebest on Jan 21, 2006
YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Jul 2, 2005
It had it's good points and it's bad points... you would've got a 6 if you hadn't had that cool little picture of the city at the beggining
by YazZMaN on Jul 2, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jun 15, 2005
Definatley has potential. Alot of editing work needs put into it. Try to make sure it stays in one tense (Past or Present).
by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
Lucid
Lucid		 Aug 26, 2004
It has some potential and some good pictures. The story doesn't quite develop. The maze seemed random and out of place. Also, some of your contributors had very poor writing making the story difficult to read (spelling, paragraphs, etc).
by Lucid on Aug 26, 2004
Benway
Benway		 Feb 3, 2004
Goodish cyberpunk start. Paranoid. Annoying maze section. It'll be better if the story gets developed more.
by Benway on Feb 3, 2004

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