The Galactic Adventures of Pierce Darkblade

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Thickskullman
Thickskullman
Jun 29, 2013
by Thickskullman on Jun 29, 2013
BearBipolarBear
BearBipolarBear
Mar 31, 2012
You are to be commended, Mr. BatCountry, for this very thorough freshman outing in the world of Infinite Story. Although this is not technically your first story, it was the one to which you devoted the most effort and which you bravely submitted to the contest. The plot is complex, the characters interesting, and the word count voluminous, all things which speak stridently in your favor. You do have some room to approve, especially in the reworking of certain sentence structures which are slightly awkward. Nonetheless, I think you deserve a 10 because I know, perhaps better than most, just what potential you possess. Onward, Sir Bat, to literary greatness!
by BearBipolarBear on Mar 31, 2012
Zac6251
Zac6251
Jul 15, 2011
Could use more rooms, but other than that good story.
by Zac6251 on Jul 15, 2011
peet2521
peet2521
Mar 7, 2011
great story.
by peet2521 on Mar 7, 2011
Dan2
Dan2
Mar 4, 2011
This is a really cool story! I appreciate the level of detail on every page. Really shows that the author cares about this story and it makes it much more interesting to read.
by Dan2 on Mar 4, 2011

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