The Galactic Adventures of Pierce Darkblade

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
chugmilk	Jun 22, 2022	Well written, definitely needs more rooms to flesh out the story options. by chugmilk on Jun 22, 2022
Thickskullman	Jun 29, 2013	by Thickskullman on Jun 29, 2013
BearBipolarBear	Mar 31, 2012	You are to be commended, Mr. BatCountry, for this very thorough freshman outing in the world of Infinite Story. Although this is not technically your first story, it was the one to which you devoted the most effort and which you bravely submitted to the contest. The plot is complex, the characters interesting, and the word count voluminous, all things which speak stridently in your favor. You do have some room to approve, especially in the reworking of certain sentence structures which are slightly awkward. Nonetheless, I think you deserve a 10 because I know, perhaps better than most, just what potential you possess. Onward, Sir Bat, to literary greatness! by BearBipolarBear on Mar 31, 2012
Zac6251	Jul 15, 2011	Could use more rooms, but other than that good story. by Zac6251 on Jul 15, 2011
peet2521	Mar 7, 2011	great story. by peet2521 on Mar 7, 2011
Dan2	Mar 4, 2011	This is a really cool story! I appreciate the level of detail on every page. Really shows that the author cares about this story and it makes it much more interesting to read. by Dan2 on Mar 4, 2011