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by Thickskullman on Jul 6, 2013
This was a cool story. Probably won't happen, but if you happen to return one day, I wouldn't mind reading more.
by EndMaster on Jan 11, 2011
This was a refreshingly different read. I liked the [i]noir[/i] haze hanging over the story, and all of its implied gloom. Even with these considerations, though, I felt the narrative could have been a bit less lethargic.
by Vesnicie on Jan 18, 2009
Incredible. Your writing style captures me like very few peoples can.

I urge you to continue this as. :)
by Calen on Nov 5, 2008

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