barney kill

Written by DSDude999 / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
sansevieria		Dec 11, 2011	sorry i meant to suggest "kidnapped not kidnaped". Good story. by sansevieria on Dec 11, 2011
sansevieria		Dec 11, 2011	Not bad. Great concept - Killing Barney never gets old. That said, a few suggestions. One, check the grammar/spelling on a few pages - for instance, "kidnapped" not kidnapped, and "you're fired" not "your fired". Also, a little more gore would make this story even more awesome. Pretty good though! by sansevieria on Dec 11, 2011
Artazansss		Sep 25, 2011	by Artazansss on Sep 25, 2011
TheCandyMan		Jul 23, 2011	My rating was completely off target..Sorry. 4 is one number less than average and I've rated good stories at the same level...This deserves at most..A 2. TheCandyMan by TheCandyMan on Jul 23, 2011
TheCandyMan		May 13, 2011	Erhmm..well...yeahhh...it's a very err..unique story! OK I'll cut the bullcrap, the grammar was poor, and the plot was completely random, but I suppose it's good for a kid. With my unique exceptional generosity, I'll give you a 4. by TheCandyMan on May 13, 2011
magic		May 15, 2010	First, let's start you off with a 10. -6 for horrible grammar. -4 for very little humor. +3 for killing Dora. 10-6-4+3=3. by magic on May 15, 2010
apotheosis		Mar 9, 2009	"he tells you that barney is a gay pervert and he needs to be killed." How old are you? by apotheosis on Mar 9, 2009
Leblanc4prez		Aug 11, 2008	The story was interesting to say the least. Whith more than one sentance per room, and better grammar... This could be good. by Leblanc4prez on Aug 11, 2008
Alejate		Jun 15, 2008	Why I found this story hilarious and refreshing is a mystery. by Alejate on Jun 15, 2008
Calen		Jun 10, 2008	Hey, Elmo is awesome. Imma eat you alife. Oh, and the substance in my... Well many things has more substance than this. Grammar, plot, and more than one sentence rooms please. by Calen on Jun 10, 2008
GHMaster		Jun 3, 2008	by GHMaster on Jun 3, 2008
GHMaster		Jun 3, 2008	this is perfect, i have always wanted to do this! by GHMaster on Jun 3, 2008