Comments & Ratings
|1 is the score this story truly desrves theres apsolutly nothink good about this story bad humor,no real plot just pointless story all around.|
|OH COME ON! I'm trying to help you here. I can't make a choice without my choice being reviewed. **** this!|
What the hell is the point in making choices if you can't be bothered to finish them off? Bad grammar. Pointless choices. And no actual plot whatsoever. |
Plus..Ed?! Are you kidding me?! -.-'
One. Grammar. -10 points. |
Two. Plot. -10 points.
Three. Humor. -10 points.
Total score: -30 points.
WHAT? I CAN ONLY SELECT AS LOW AS 1?!!!
Curse you, infinite-story.com rating score! CURSE JOO! D:
In all honesty? This is no different than the dozens, perhaps hundreds of bad grammar go-nowhere stories plaguing the site. Try again.