The Hardest Life: PT I

Written by hep0005 / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 1.50 (4 ratings) (4)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Feb 21, 2012
I feel like I accidentally continued reading this. So you get an extra point for subliminally convincing me to press forward through the pages.

But I feel like you lose every other point because after making what seemed like an unending series of choices, all that I had accomplished in the story was this:

I woke up, got dressed, grabbed a briefcase, locked the door, and opened the damn thing.

I submitted a room that ends in me killing myself. I hope that you approve it because I feel like it's the perfect ending after reading this.
by donteatpoop on Feb 21, 2012
hakinaro
hakinaro		 Aug 18, 2008
by hakinaro on Aug 18, 2008
Alejate
Alejate		 Jun 15, 2008
I can't see where this story is going. I failed to finish it because it was sooo booooring. I give it a 2 for an attractive title and story description though.
by Alejate on Jun 15, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Feb 9, 2008
A little effort and maybe some substance next time?
by apotheosis on Feb 9, 2008

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