Comments & Ratings
||Jan 10, 2020||Hilarious|
||Mar 23, 2017||that is a good story I recommend you adding on to the story and instead of making a paragraph chunk it down to smaller paragraphs|
||Apr 22, 2016||
It may not be MY country from Hell, but once again you've created an elaborate world with a main character who has real emotions.|
I don't know what your inspiration was for this story, but it seems...genuinely inspired. Custia and all.
My thread ended with a kiss from Szil in the cemetery at night. Teehee.
Seriously, though. I enjoyed the sweet ending to the thread I read.
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||Nov 6, 2008||I liked it alot. The prose is good. Especially on the last page in the 'route' I took. The one with the sunset by the Moses. The general mood of despair and hopelessness and the rampant corruption adds to the hellishness. Reminded me of India at times.|
||Aug 9, 2008||Very original and interesting. Good job on this!|
||Jul 10, 2008|
||Jul 9, 2008||Profound. This story sets the bar high for future writers. The setting is alive and breathing and is as much a part of the story as the characters themselves. Brilliant work, Ves. Have my babies?|
||Jul 9, 2008||Solid story. Creative, original, and well executed.|