The Country from Hell

Written by Vesnicie / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Jayhawker6		Jan 10, 2020	Hilarious by Jayhawker6 on Jan 10, 2020
jade131934		Mar 23, 2017	that is a good story I recommend you adding on to the story and instead of making a paragraph chunk it down to smaller paragraphs by jade131934 on Mar 23, 2017
ChubbyTeletubby		Apr 22, 2016	It may not be MY country from Hell, but once again you've created an elaborate world with a main character who has real emotions. I don't know what your inspiration was for this story, but it seems...genuinely inspired. Custia and all. My thread ended with a kiss from Szil in the cemetery at night. Teehee. Seriously, though. I enjoyed the sweet ending to the thread I read. by ChubbyTeletubby on Apr 22, 2016
Artazansss		Sep 24, 2011	by Artazansss on Sep 24, 2011
Infinate		Apr 28, 2010	by Infinate on Apr 28, 2010
thoric		Nov 6, 2008	I liked it alot. The prose is good. Especially on the last page in the 'route' I took. The one with the sunset by the Moses. The general mood of despair and hopelessness and the rampant corruption adds to the hellishness. Reminded me of India at times. by thoric on Nov 6, 2008
Cat2000		Aug 9, 2008	Very original and interesting. Good job on this! by Cat2000 on Aug 9, 2008
Locke		Jul 10, 2008	by Locke on Jul 10, 2008
donteatpoop		Jul 9, 2008	Profound. This story sets the bar high for future writers. The setting is alive and breathing and is as much a part of the story as the characters themselves. Brilliant work, Ves. Have my babies? by donteatpoop on Jul 9, 2008
apotheosis		Jul 9, 2008	Solid story. Creative, original, and well executed. by apotheosis on Jul 9, 2008