weird story
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Artazansss![]() |
Oct 30, 2011 | I think your username describes this story very well. | |
magic![]() |
May 30, 2010 | This story is weird... | |
Alejate![]() |
Jun 15, 2008 | Uhh, right. Weird. | |
zaxoman![]() |
Apr 2, 2008 | What the HELL is this? | |
lod506![]() |
Nov 9, 2007 | you have no choices this isn't a choose your're own adventure its pick or die it sucks | |
superdeerman![]() |
Oct 15, 2007 | Random? | |
apotheosis![]() |
Sep 21, 2007 | This is an incoherent piece of garbage. | |
donteatpoop![]() |
Sep 3, 2007 | At least you didn't try and fool us with a username like "masterful writer". | |
Vesnicie![]() |
Aug 30, 2007 | I mean, if this story were a vacuum cleaner, it would be the amazing shit-sucking vacuum cleaner for lazy assholes who can't be bothered to move their bowels on their own. So, turn this story into a shit-sucking vacuum, patent it, and make a shit-ton of money. But please, for fuck's sake, do not continue sucking the shit out of the written word. |
This sucks shit.|
Calen![]() |
Aug 30, 2007 | Hun, please try for grammar and a story with an actual plot/more than one sentence per room. |