The Terrible Story

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Author Rating Date Comment
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
May 27, 2011
Haha. I actually didn't find that annoying, rather, I found it pretty funny. Usually the randomness and grammar of other stories is quite stupid and unfunny, but you're a good writer I must say. This is supposed to be terrible, I suppose you achieved that in many ways, but at the same time, it's readable and fun, which is what I like about it. The things that piss me off is when people write good stories, but they're unfinished and left to rot and decay on this site. You however, have no will to do such a thing. Anyway, good story, no matter how terrible it may seem, smoking pig to get high is always awesome in my eyes. Especially when it involves your mother, you could call me sadistic but this is a story. This rating is another story that involves fiction, and non-fiction, you just have to figure out which is which. None of this is a lie. That in itself could possibly be a lie. But it isn't. <-- that could also possibly be a lie. <--- so could this!

Am I bored, or am I just stoned? Possibly both.
by TheCandyMan on May 27, 2011
vegabond213
vegabond213
Jul 1, 2010
by vegabond213 on Jul 1, 2010
wrpbeast666
wrpbeast666
Jun 5, 2009
by wrpbeast666 on Jun 5, 2009
magic
magic
Oct 12, 2008
This story sucks. I hate it! I wish you were dead!
by magic on Oct 12, 2008
Alejate
Alejate
Jun 16, 2008
HILARIOUS! This is the best bad story yet!!!
by Alejate on Jun 16, 2008
PredatorKing
PredatorKing
May 9, 2007
I like pie.
by PredatorKing on May 9, 2007
Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez
May 8, 2007
Shippo: HAVE YOU STOLEN MY NIPPLES?
by Leblanc4prez on May 8, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
May 5, 2007
You succeeded in making a terrible story... but the idea is very cliche.
by apotheosis on May 5, 2007
happyhak
happyhak
May 5, 2007
This is a bad story! The choices are rubbish! Guess thats why they call it: The Terrible Story!
by happyhak on May 5, 2007
Storywriter
Storywriter
May 4, 2007
I just couldn't give a one.
by Storywriter on May 4, 2007
shadowzxv
shadowzxv
May 1, 2007
#$%^ing awesomely funny !@#$ing cool dude!!!!
by shadowzxv on May 1, 2007
Vesnicie
Vesnicie
May 1, 2007
I am giving this a six partially because your grammar is not horrible and the story actually started out sort of funny. It made me chortle to imagine my mom smoking a pig to get high. In reality, she sticks to the hash.

The idea of the "crappy story" isn't original, and I think it's problematic anyway. If the crap is too skillful, then it's a good story. However, since you set out to annoy, then you certainly accomplished this by quickly letting your story digress into unfunny randomness and the kind of obnoxious self-indulgent one-liner rooms that raise my blood pressure.

However, in an effort to send the ball of annoyance back into your court, I am not giving this story a horrible rating.
by Vesnicie on May 1, 2007

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