The Terrible Story
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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TheCandyMan |
May 27, 2011 | Haha. I actually didn't find that annoying, rather, I found it pretty funny. Usually the randomness and grammar of other stories is quite stupid and unfunny, but you're a good writer I must say. This is supposed to be terrible, I suppose you achieved that in many ways, but at the same time, it's readable and fun, which is what I like about it. The things that piss me off is when people write good stories, but they're unfinished and left to rot and decay on this site. You however, have no will to do such a thing. Anyway, good story, no matter how terrible it may seem, smoking pig to get high is always awesome in my eyes. Especially when it involves your mother, you could call me sadistic but this is a story. This rating is another story that involves fiction, and non-fiction, you just have to figure out which is which. None of this is a lie. That in itself could possibly be a lie. But it isn't. <-- that could also possibly be a lie. <--- so could this! Am I bored, or am I just stoned? Possibly both. |
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vegabond213 |
Jul 1, 2010 | ||
wrpbeast666 |
Jun 5, 2009 | ||
magic |
Oct 12, 2008 | This story sucks. I hate it! I wish you were dead! | |
Alejate |
Jun 16, 2008 | HILARIOUS! This is the best bad story yet!!! | |
PredatorKing |
May 9, 2007 | I like pie. | |
Leblanc4prez |
May 8, 2007 | Shippo: HAVE YOU STOLEN MY NIPPLES? | |
apotheosis |
May 5, 2007 | You succeeded in making a terrible story... but the idea is very cliche. | |
happyhak |
May 5, 2007 | This is a bad story! The choices are rubbish! Guess thats why they call it: The Terrible Story! | |
Storywriter |
May 4, 2007 | I just couldn't give a one. | |
shadowzxv |
May 1, 2007 | #$%^ing awesomely funny !@#$ing cool dude!!!! | |
Vesnicie |
May 1, 2007 | I am giving this a six partially because your grammar is not horrible and the story actually started out sort of funny. It made me chortle to imagine my mom smoking a pig to get high. In reality, she sticks to the hash. The idea of the "crappy story" isn't original, and I think it's problematic anyway. If the crap is too skillful, then it's a good story. However, since you set out to annoy, then you certainly accomplished this by quickly letting your story digress into unfunny randomness and the kind of obnoxious self-indulgent one-liner rooms that raise my blood pressure. However, in an effort to send the ball of annoyance back into your court, I am not giving this story a horrible rating. |