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The Adventures Of Garry 501.5

Written by Muskrat123 / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan		Jun 9, 2011	I got to page two and...was forced to quit because I knew how bad this story was going to become. Yes. terrible. by TheCandyMan on Jun 9, 2011
dragavan		Apr 20, 2007	The only reason I even looked at this story is because of a posting on the forums about how bad this crap was. Then I saw the ratings these stories were getting and had to see if they were really that bad, especially given there are like five of them now. Well, the verdict is in. THEY ARE. These may be a collection of in-jokes for fans of Facepunch Studios, but they are not coherent stories by any stretch of the imagination. Given that this is a Story writing site, I have to use that criteria when rating it. Even if I got the jokes, the writing would still be atrocious and sparse. Ever think of putting more than ten words or one sentence on a page? And in reply to the angry statements by another reviewer (who may work for Facepunch for all I know), you don't have to know the subject matter of a story before hand to be able to tell if it's well written or not. I could easily read Harry Potter or Buffy fan-fic without ever seeing a thing about them and still tell if it was written well. I wouldn't get all the in-jokes or references, but I would be able to follow the story and tell how well it was written. This tripe, is not. Now, I rarely give tens or ones to stories because they are for things that have that extra something special that pushes them outside the bounds of normal ratings. This story (and I a sure the others of its ilk I am not even going to try to read) actually deserves this honor. It's like the author actually tried hard to make sure there was nothing of value here and connect it in ways that made no rhyme or reason... So 1. by dragavan on Apr 20, 2007
PredatorKing		Apr 20, 2007	To the retards: If you don't know what FacePunch is, then why the hell are you reading, let alone rating a FacePunch related comic!? by PredatorKing on Apr 20, 2007
Monkeyfun		Mar 5, 2007	great job son by Monkeyfun on Mar 5, 2007
apotheosis		Mar 5, 2007	Pure crap. There is really nothing else to be said. I could give constructive criticism but what would be the point? by apotheosis on Mar 5, 2007
donteatpoop		Mar 5, 2007	This rating of 1 is actually quite generous given the amount of work and effort you put into it. by donteatpoop on Mar 5, 2007