Comments & Ratings

by Laevi on Jul 26, 2015
I love the necromancer. It is just so cool and i enjoyed it.
by jackhammer40k on Feb 23, 2015
Really enjoyed this. Endmaster has a knack for leading you where you want to go -- and throwing in some twists you didn't know you wanted. And I think this is my favorite of his. Very satisfying to read.

While it didn't seem to have the same variance of choices that "Ground Zero" had, the overall storyline made you feel that the decisions you made were more "world-wide." This story makes you feel powerful.

I also really enjoyed "Eternal" but I felt that the endings weren't as dramatic as the ones here in Necromancer.

Best of the Best of the Best imho.
by Ashton on Sep 17, 2013
Brilliant. Even better than EndMaster's usual standard.
by Thickskullman on Aug 30, 2013
The story line is great, but the grammer could use a fix.
by MasterofAll on Jun 25, 2013
Okay, so, I read this way back in the day. I loved it. I even commented on it once already. But, dude. This world, story, writing... *sigh*

EndMaster, you are an amazing writer. Seriously. I've been working on a novel for a year or so now, and I keep thinking about this story. The detail, the dialogue, fucking everything. If I ever get my thing published, would it be alright to list you as one of the inspirations for it? Because you fucking are.
Granted, I'm not stealing anything from you, but it IS a fantasy novel, so it has, you know... fantasy shit in it. Anyway, thank you for inspiring me to write in the first place.
I'm going back to reading your story now. Again. Because it's amazing.
by Salamislim on Nov 28, 2012
Heh. Well that is certainly one way of looking at it.
by EndMaster on Sep 28, 2012
Well I don't think he was a villain more like a victim of nature we all know we can't defy our true nature no matter how hard we try welp that's my shitty philosophical input.
by Marksdarkness on Sep 22, 2012
by FilipinoWalrus on Oct 30, 2011
Should be a motion picture!!
by Serede on Jan 15, 2011
Milianotus is a fucktard who obviously didn't get it. The protagonist is a fucking villian (Should've been pretty obvious with the title and first few pages) and doing evil things are going to be the choices. If you didn't want to be a "sick conqueror" (Lol at your sensitivity) you shouldn't have been reading it in the first place.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
by pedromundo on Dec 22, 2010
by infernalbovine on Nov 25, 2010
by Zac6251 on Aug 17, 2010
Another great story from you
by silentninja on May 3, 2010
Excellent story. Congratulations to the author.
by bsal on Feb 2, 2010
Amazing story.
by Lrdwhyt on Jan 18, 2010
by ShadowLycan on Jan 18, 2010
Great story
by nodnarB on Nov 8, 2009
I loved the beginning, I loved the main character, I loved the idea... but what the fuck?! I didn't want to be any kind of sick conquer of the city! More choices, please, just like there was in the Legend. Very good story, but not a good infinite-story, that's why it's only 6!
by Milianotus on Oct 22, 2009
i would love to see a spin of with the other types of magic to choice from
by Kylo24 on Jul 29, 2009
kick ass man
by Bigbadmonkey on Jan 25, 2009
by Everlosst on Jan 4, 2009
really enjoyed it. i liked the way you blended in the modern mix with fantasy (as if mages and necromancers swore like us lol)
by mechano1 on Dec 2, 2008
I spent so much time on this. One of the best stories (interactive or not), that I've had the pleasure of reading on the internet.

by PaperWario on Sep 29, 2008
by Kyylick on Sep 26, 2008
by Zarok on Aug 11, 2008
Excellent, even though i'm new, and this is the second story at this site i've read, (the first being ground zero) I think this is a very good read.
Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together,

I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed
by Deathknight13 on Jul 8, 2008
by Genesis on Mar 16, 2008
This is the greatest love story ever written! I love a little gore with my romance. By far my favorite story on the site... possibly my favorite story ever written.
by KatieWroteIt on Jan 8, 2008
by Thiefswipe on Jan 4, 2008
one of the best stories ive read
by Tulips on Dec 6, 2007
by vegabond213 on Oct 31, 2007
very good, i can't stop reading
by Bryton779 on Oct 29, 2007
3 words...BEST STORY EVER!!!!
by SandDemon on Oct 22, 2007
Well, now that I've done this, End is sure to reset the ratings for sure... right? :)

Perhaps you've never put this much THOUGHT into a story before, perhaps you've never hit on a genre agreeable to me, perhaps I'm waking up from a long nap... I don't know. This was a very enjoyable read.

Even with my eye for detail, I don't remember any out-and-out errors (although you may want to change "Narrow minded focus on killing someone" on the first page to "Narrow mindedly focusing...") that were so grievous as to destroy my concentration.

I particularly enjoyed the fact that some pictures had captions, much like there would be in an ACTUAL book. Have you considered having this published, by the way?

Excellent work. I only wish I could focus on any ONE story long enough to do the same.
by michaelrayholt on Oct 7, 2007
by neon725 on Sep 14, 2007
This story is fucking awesome. One of the best I've ever read.
by Salamislim on Aug 20, 2007
This story is amazing.
by Salamislim on Aug 20, 2007
That was amazing. Best story I've seen yet.
by Goren on Aug 7, 2007
This story is fucking amazing. Thank you for that!
by scottmah on Aug 3, 2007
Utterly Superb. I read every room with great enjoyment.
by Futurecast on Jun 13, 2007
true this is za best
by liamheregonnaread on Jun 5, 2007
THIS IS THA FREAKIN BEST STORY EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by liamheregonnaread on Jun 5, 2007
by Plastic on Jun 3, 2007
by Jargner on May 20, 2007
I think this story wins for ratings...
by apotheosis on May 17, 2007
Brilliant. I think this has to be your best story yet.
by BurntFlower on May 16, 2007
This is one of those situations where I wish I could give a half-point rating. I would like to give it a 9.5, taking off for some grammar mistakes. I also felt that the story meandered a little bit; it could have been a little tighter in terms of plot. I was happy to see big rooms with lots of action in them, but I would have appreciated even a bit more sensory description.

On the plus side, there are some very funny parts of this story and some vivid characters. Also, the plot is interesting and I'm always a fan of the anti-hero. I have decided to base this and future ratings on a relative scale for this site, so I give you a ten based on the fact that this is one of the five best stories I have read here.

And thanks for the heads-up on the carpet-munching witches. That means I need to not invite certain friends over for sleepovers anymore.
by Vesnicie on Apr 29, 2007
by Victoria7 on Apr 15, 2007
My second favorite story on this site.
by Qflingspoo on Apr 7, 2007
The sheer number of perfect ratings is astonishing. Part of me wants to ruin that just for the hell of it, but I'd have to be a total ass and pick a freakishly low number just to make a dent. "Surely," I thought, "I could at least find enough flaws to give it a nine."

And then I noticed that the story's outcome determined the moment you side between Big Red or the professor, and I was impressed. It flows very well, and doesn't ever seem to stall. It's a bit dialogue heavy in parts...but I get impatient after awhile...and, really, who am I to bicker about excessive verbose-ness? The dialogue and descriptions were either necessary for the visual imagery, or important to the plot or humor. It's long, but I can't really think of anything I could label as 'filler'.

The only thing I could possibly whine about is the freakish amount of power that the main characters have, that no one else does. Surely, someone out there would have been just as adept as at nature magic as the protagonist is at necromancy? Surely, the demons couldn't've taken over kingdoms that quickly? Surely, good could've put up more of a fight than just the sister? It all seems excessive. None of the lesser characters are nearly as powerful as the main ones. It's a ridiculous variation of God-modding.

But, really, who cares?
by Usoki on Mar 22, 2007
Probably the best solo-author story on this site.
by EvilZombi on Mar 21, 2007
I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! So many choices...and so many good endings! I liked every one of them. Keep up the good work!
by tandaman on Mar 14, 2007
Alright, alright, you've probably got to feel pretty good having so many perfect 10s, but man oh man you deserve them. Awesome story.
by Calen on Mar 12, 2007
Very Excellent story. I went back and chose different directions and each different choice led to a completely different place. I do not know how this story could be improved upon.
by dnukem on Mar 6, 2007
Another excellent job EndMaster. This isn't my favorite of your works, but there is so much more detail and story in this than any of your other stories. Excellent plotlines, your character development was great and you actually managed to provide the reader with a series of interesting side characters.
by donteatpoop on Mar 4, 2007
Yes! So glad to see another EndMaster story and a fantasy one no less!
by Drewc91 on Feb 27, 2007
This is incredible,the fact that such a great story could be completed in only 2 days. I love the idea controling the "bad" guy for once. Lots of fun and humor too. and the violence-gotta love the violence.
by glowworm on Feb 19, 2007
This story kept me enthralled. Endmaster created a world similar to others I have seen before, but led me through it in a completely different way. He kept all the details straight throughout the story, and only minor blemishes in the writing quality were encountered. Truly something to be envious of.
by xnull on Feb 18, 2007
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