Another Monday Morning

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

(48)

Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Dontannoyme	Oct 9, 2020	Finish the boook by Dontannoyme on Oct 9, 2020
NoCanDo55	Jan 21, 2016	Too tucking lazy to write the rest of the story. by NoCanDo55 on Jan 21, 2016
Pelyphin	Mar 4, 2015	I read this along time ago. Quality is not an issue - given the history - but others deserve to supplant this. by Pelyphin on Mar 4, 2015
Madbrad200	May 22, 2014	Funny but unfinished. by Madbrad200 on May 22, 2014
Clark	Mar 6, 2013	by Clark on Mar 6, 2013
EndMaster	Jan 3, 2011	Been awhile since I've bother rating a story, but given that this is the "first one" I figure I should finally get around to rating it. This one suffers from a lot of randomness and bad writing or minimalist writing such as getting tons of pages with only about 3 or 4 words on them. Anyway Hall of Infinite Doors has done a better job at doing what this one set out to do since it relies on a little structure at least. Still it gets a few points for being the first and inspiring Apoth's hilarious obsessive mad quest to beat the damn thing in size and hits. by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
mayanightstar	Nov 25, 2010	Hall of infinite doors is obviously superior in every way, shape, form, size, texture and or luminosity. But this is still worth reading and adding to occasionally to practice on. It'd be pretty interesting to see what would happen if we really worked on this! by mayanightstar on Nov 25, 2010
Midey	Oct 23, 2010	by Midey on Oct 23, 2010
infernalbovine	Mar 4, 2010	by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
cappstv	Jan 19, 2010	What the hell is with the part with the jelly ben by cappstv on Jan 19, 2010
Fezero	Apr 8, 2009	by Fezero on Apr 8, 2009
vancelandow	Mar 14, 2009	by vancelandow on Mar 14, 2009
laco	Feb 5, 2009	its okay by laco on Feb 5, 2009
BringerOfTales	Nov 23, 2008	Great story. It's huge and has lots of great moments in it. It also has many idiotic rooms made by morons. Lemonlover definitely gets the biggest idiot award for littering this story with copious amounts of his crap and ending every possibility to intriguing story lines so that no one else can actually give them decent endings. Congrats! by BringerOfTales on Nov 23, 2008
Tulips	Dec 4, 2007	by Tulips on Dec 4, 2007
JJJthebanisher	Oct 27, 2007	Really not very good. by JJJthebanisher on Oct 27, 2007
PredatorKing	Jul 30, 2007	Predator King here, I've started work on a sort of remake of this story, does anyone mind if I make it public? by PredatorKing on Jul 30, 2007
joe60	Jul 30, 2007	this is my favirate story and is the best story on the site! there is so many choices and so many possibillities that the game never gets old! by joe60 on Jul 30, 2007
PredatorKing	Jul 29, 2007	DAMNIT! This story is certainly awesome, but there really needs to be more choices at the start! Maybe a sequel will solve that problem? Starts winking madly for the next six hours by PredatorKing on Jul 29, 2007
Armando322	Jul 17, 2007	It was good, though incomplete, I enjoyed adding to it. by Armando322 on Jul 17, 2007
Nurmekas	Jun 8, 2007	Reminds me of a movie i like, nice story. by Nurmekas on Jun 8, 2007
apotheosis	Jun 3, 2007	Hall of Infinite Doors is superior to this work in quality and length. Waste no more time on this poser story, go to the only true collaborative effort worth contributing to! by apotheosis on Jun 3, 2007
shadowzxv	Apr 25, 2007	this story is awesome! P.S. go to work, spray the place with 9mm, sit down, kick the cop, use force, use lightsaber, force choke, run, and you have my writing! by shadowzxv on Apr 25, 2007
PredatorKing	Apr 21, 2007	Nice story, I like how you can pretty much twist the story however you want. by PredatorKing on Apr 21, 2007
tye44	Apr 1, 2007	very good i like this story just wish there were more rooms by tye44 on Apr 1, 2007
chaingang2	Mar 10, 2007	by chaingang2 on Mar 10, 2007
happyhak	Feb 10, 2007	This story is kinda weird! Because I mean if you only look at the beggining then the hippo part your gunna be thinking how did i end up here? by happyhak on Feb 10, 2007
Dan2	Oct 8, 2006	Well, it is a classic. by Dan2 on Oct 8, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 22, 2006	Terribly random... Terribly poor writing... Terribly inane... Just terrible. by michaelrayholt on Aug 22, 2006
apotheosis	Jul 2, 2006	by apotheosis on Jul 2, 2006
kpeaches726	Apr 5, 2006	by kpeaches726 on Apr 5, 2006
Marshmello	Mar 18, 2006	Boring... sorry but for some reason reading this makes my brain numb... by Marshmello on Mar 18, 2006
VodkaLemon	Sep 22, 2005	Great by VodkaLemon on Sep 22, 2005
algrewehou	May 10, 2005	This is a great story because there are so many contributions and the story branches so randomly that it should appeal to anyone who reads it. There are squirrel's, too, i think. by algrewehou on May 10, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 19, 2005	I didn't give it a 10 because sometimes it lacks in quality. But the overall deepness is amazing. Gets a good rating because quantity does count for something. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
Joebwoy	Feb 12, 2005	I can't even call this a story. The choices and freedom you have makes you feel like you're in Grand Theft auto. Good Work. I hope to reach your level by Joebwoy on Feb 12, 2005
Ratty17	Nov 27, 2004	I have to show respect 4 this one...... by Ratty17 on Nov 27, 2004
misshale	Nov 17, 2004	by misshale on Nov 17, 2004
RockNRoll	Nov 6, 2004	by RockNRoll on Nov 6, 2004
kieren21	Oct 23, 2004	I prefer quality over quantity any day by kieren21 on Oct 23, 2004
Mechaman	Oct 13, 2004	Really cool... by Mechaman on Oct 13, 2004
Karold	Oct 8, 2004	by Karold on Oct 8, 2004
packratt5454	Oct 5, 2004	This story deserves a 10, just because it is so classic. by packratt5454 on Oct 5, 2004
jeffisthebest	Oct 3, 2004	I cant believe megaman gave it a 1... maybe that's why he got the boot... by jeffisthebest on Oct 3, 2004
Megamantn	Sep 26, 2004	YOU ARE BAD! by Megamantn on Sep 26, 2004
YazZMaN	Sep 22, 2004	Very interesting story, where the possibilities are limitless, which is pretty much what this site is about, right? Anyways, your right it does vary, but it just so fun to do whatever the heck you feel like. That's why it's so sad when you run into a dead end. =( by YazZMaN on Sep 22, 2004
Douglas	Jul 21, 2004	by Douglas on Jul 21, 2004
WarlordRak	Jul 14, 2004	". . ." And that's all ah got to say 'bout that. Great story and great sub stories. Overall, an enjoyable experience. I give it two thumbs up. Up what? Don't ask. by WarlordRak on Jul 14, 2004
NamelessOne	Jul 12, 2004	Best story ever by NamelessOne on Jul 12, 2004
NCPolice55571	Mar 25, 2004	Since it actually isn't mine it is fair that I rate it. This is a classic piece that defines this site. You have the good, the bad and the ugly and put all together you have one incredible masterpiece work of art. You have a sample of everyone from this site and is a great place to stick your foot into the wtaer before jumping in the pool and going swimming. So to all those who contribute this ten belongs to you. by NCPolice55571 on Mar 25, 2004
Benway	Feb 5, 2004	Totally random quality depending on who wrote each room. Some is terrible, but other parts are cool. Overall, it's just good mindless fun which you can get lost in. by Benway on Feb 5, 2004
CJW	Jan 21, 2004	Undeed, the quality is highly variable. Still, some of it is very good. Some of it is very random. I guess that's what you get with a wide spectrum of contributors. by CJW on Jan 21, 2004
Rpgxper	Jan 21, 2004	Not bad, not at all. I have seen better, and I have seen worse. This story is somewhat asmusing. by Rpgxper on Jan 21, 2004
EnderWiggin	Jan 12, 2004	This is a strange story. I would give it a 7 simply because it is classic (for this site). The quality of writing varies wildly throughout the story, but is at times quite good. by EnderWiggin on Jan 12, 2004

Rate Story