Comments & Ratings
|Too tucking lazy to write the rest of the story.|
|I read this along time ago. Quality is not an issue - given the history - but others deserve to supplant this.|
|Funny but unfinished.|
Been awhile since I've bother rating a story, but given that this is the "first one" I figure I should finally get around to rating it. |
This one suffers from a lot of randomness and bad writing or minimalist writing such as getting tons of pages with only about 3 or 4 words on them.
Anyway Hall of Infinite Doors has done a better job at doing what this one set out to do since it relies on a little structure at least.
Still it gets a few points for being the first and inspiring Apoth's hilarious obsessive mad quest to beat the damn thing in size and hits.
|Hall of infinite doors is obviously superior in every way, shape, form, size, texture and or luminosity. But this is still worth reading and adding to occasionally to practice on. It'd be pretty interesting to see what would happen if we really worked on this!|
|What the hell is with the part with the jelly ben|
Great story. It's huge and has lots of great moments in it. It also has many idiotic rooms made by morons.|
Lemonlover definitely gets the biggest idiot award for littering this story with copious amounts of his crap and ending every possibility to intriguing story lines so that no one else can actually give them decent endings. Congrats!
|Really not very good.|
|Predator King here, I've started work on a sort of remake of this story, does anyone mind if I make it public?|
|this is my favirate story and is the best story on the site! there is so many choices and so many possibillities that the game never gets old!|
|DAMNIT! This story is certainly awesome, but there really needs to be more choices at the start! Maybe a sequel will solve that problem? *Starts winking madly for the next six hours*|
|It was good, though incomplete, I enjoyed adding to it.|
|Reminds me of a movie i like, nice story.|
|Hall of Infinite Doors is superior to this work in quality and length. Waste no more time on this poser story, go to the only true collaborative effort worth contributing to!|
|this story is awesome! P.S. go to work, spray the place with 9mm, sit down, kick the cop, use force, use lightsaber, force choke, run, and you have my writing!|
|Nice story, I like how you can pretty much twist the story however you want.|
|very good i like this story just wish there were more rooms|
|This story is kinda weird! Because I mean if you only look at the beggining then the hippo part your gunna be thinking how did i end up here?|
|Well, it is a classic.|
Terribly poor writing...
|Boring... sorry but for some reason reading this makes my brain numb...|
|This is a great story because there are so many contributions and the story branches so randomly that it should appeal to anyone who reads it. There are squirrel's, too, i think.|
|I didn't give it a 10 because sometimes it lacks in quality. But the overall deepness is amazing. Gets a good rating because quantity does count for something.|
|I can't even call this a story. The choices and freedom you have makes you feel like you're in Grand Theft auto. Good Work. I hope to reach your level|
|I have to show respect 4 this one......|
|I prefer quality over quantity any day|
|This story deserves a 10, just because it is so classic.|
|I cant believe megaman gave it a 1... maybe that's why he got the boot...|
|YOU ARE BAD!|
|Very interesting story, where the possibilities are limitless, which is pretty much what this site is about, right? Anyways, your right it does vary, but it just so fun to do whatever the heck you feel like. That's why it's so sad when you run into a dead end. =(|
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And that's all ah got to say 'bout that.
Great story and great sub stories. Overall, an enjoyable experience. I give it two thumbs up. Up what? Don't ask.
|Best story ever|
|Since it actually isn't mine it is fair that I rate it. This is a classic piece that defines this site. You have the good, the bad and the ugly and put all together you have one incredible masterpiece work of art. You have a sample of everyone from this site and is a great place to stick your foot into the wtaer before jumping in the pool and going swimming. So to all those who contribute this ten belongs to you.|
|Totally random quality depending on who wrote each room. Some is terrible, but other parts are cool. Overall, it's just good mindless fun which you can get lost in.|
|Undeed, the quality is highly variable. Still, some of it is very good. Some of it is very random. I guess that's what you get with a wide spectrum of contributors.|
|Not bad, not at all. I have seen better, and I have seen worse. This story is somewhat asmusing.|
|This is a strange story. I would give it a 7 simply because it is classic (for this site). The quality of writing varies wildly throughout the story, but is at times quite good.|