Comments & Ratings
||May 31, 2007||
Very well done, Gribble. Excellent writing, and it seems that an actual plot is just over the horizon here. You seem to be setting up for the plot well, anyway.|
I'm not entirely sure if Wild Turkey was around back then, but I could be wrong on that.
Awesome jow, hope to see more from you.
||Jan 28, 2007||I really like it, especially all the violence but I can't give it higher than an 8 for topic material alone. You style is good and I find the story flows well, but paying a bit more attention to detail and adding substantially to the story couldn't hurt. See DEP's Paco to see how a 10 is done. Still, excellent start.|