Slaughter Gulch

Written by Gribble / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
donteatpoop		May 31, 2007	Very well done, Gribble. Excellent writing, and it seems that an actual plot is just over the horizon here. You seem to be setting up for the plot well, anyway. I'm not entirely sure if Wild Turkey was around back then, but I could be wrong on that. Awesome jow, hope to see more from you. by donteatpoop on May 31, 2007
apotheosis		Jan 28, 2007	I really like it, especially all the violence but I can't give it higher than an 8 for topic material alone. You style is good and I find the story flows well, but paying a bit more attention to detail and adding substantially to the story couldn't hurt. See DEP's Paco to see how a 10 is done. Still, excellent start. by apotheosis on Jan 28, 2007