rock star

Written by generallee / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Artazansss		Sep 24, 2011	by Artazansss on Sep 24, 2011
TheCandyMan		Jun 20, 2011	What Leblanc..? Anyway..Interesting story... by TheCandyMan on Jun 20, 2011
Rockstar		Jun 23, 2007	IM ALREADY A ROCKSTAR!! by Rockstar on Jun 23, 2007
Leblanc4prez		Jun 17, 2007	I am the queen of France! by Leblanc4prez on Jun 17, 2007
Carrec		Jan 19, 2007	by Carrec on Jan 19, 2007
apotheosis		Jul 10, 2006	Could've been good had any effort been put forth. I give it a 3 because it is much better than some other stories cough dollface's random story cough by apotheosis on Jul 10, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby		May 9, 2006	Please just die. Take about 99.999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999% of humanity with you while you're at it. Thanks. Yours truly, ChubbyT P.S. I love you by ChubbyTeletubby on May 9, 2006
jeffisthebest		May 1, 2006	100% crap. No traces of urine. by jeffisthebest on May 1, 2006
dragavan		Apr 28, 2006	This is not a rating related comment, so I left it out of there... But why is this marked as MA? I can't imagine that even if most of the rooms were detailed it would be MA. The content seems to be like it would be at the level of R at worst. Rating something MA will not get you more readers, since MA is ignored by default on searches. It will only get you the readers who bother to choose to look for MA stories either as a full search or just to find porn... Which this isn't. by dragavan on Apr 28, 2006
dragavan		Apr 28, 2006	Okay, this story could have been slightly interesting if you actually had choice in it (rather than just getting to try to guess what the author thinks the cool answer would be), The rooms actually had some descriptions to them (rather than short news blurbs about the events of the choice), and actually made some level of sense. I hate stories that just railroad you to make one choice. Why bother even giving me other options if they are all just going to give me one line (that usually just says you suck) and then end? Try to expand a couple of these options all the way to an ending, or at east make them a few choices deep before they end and tell you that you suck. The only good thing I can say about this one is seems to be complete and has an actual "successful" ending. Not that the ending makes much sense. Also, it's not the worst story on the site by a long shot, so I'll give it a 3... barely. by dragavan on Apr 28, 2006
YazZMaN		Apr 24, 2006	Pretty bad man. You'll have to put in a little effort before you get any criticism (which would currently be useless) from me. by YazZMaN on Apr 24, 2006