Random story of random consequence

Written by slashrulez / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
TheMadWriter		Feb 16, 2016	This is the best ever, one of the best planned stories on here. It is truly magnificent. (P.S: Dem gnomes are truly seductive.) by TheMadWriter on Feb 16, 2016
marissalikesgreenday		Jul 2, 2014	Just a bunch of random crap.. No plot and doesn't make any sense. by marissalikesgreenday on Jul 2, 2014
shadowzxv		May 21, 2007	SWEET! 10! 10! by shadowzxv on May 21, 2007
LingLing		Mar 4, 2007	for "Thats one goddamn crafty gnome. He thought ahead and planted a carbomb in your car." by LingLing on Mar 4, 2007
apotheosis		Dec 3, 2006	Yeah well... I liked your use of images, but the story itself was horrendous. by apotheosis on Dec 3, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby		May 11, 2006	Why? by ChubbyTeletubby on May 11, 2006
jeffisthebest		May 9, 2006	Do you know why I liked this story? It was just like my first story! Same basic plot or lack thereof, same randomness, same completely awful writing style and description... This guy could turn into slashisthebest! by jeffisthebest on May 9, 2006
YazZMaN		Apr 18, 2006	"Thats one goddamn crafty gnome. He thought ahead and planted a carbomb in your car." It would have gotten a four, but this line, along with another one which I disremember, made me smile a little bit. Other than that, the story is pretty rough looking. Sure it hit it's random mark, but unfortunately, people don't enjoy reading random stories unless they are detailed and have a rational plotline. by YazZMaN on Apr 18, 2006
dragavan		Apr 18, 2006	Well... this succeeds at being random, unfortunately that doesn't make it good. In fact I would have completely ignored the story if it didn't get rated with a 10 and showed up on the top list of the site. I can't even really call it a story. It's more of a collection of random scenes that don't connect together to make a whole. There is also the matter of pretty much every choice except the seemingly random "correct" choice being a dead end that makes this less fun to read. It's more a railroaded story that punishes you for leaving the path set before you, only without marking the path. Perhaps if more than one choice actually went somewhere it might be interesting. I might have rated it a 5 since it did succeed at what was stated at the start (wanting to be random) and I would have followed the request to not rate it if it was not for your friend giving it that ten. So I saw it, read through it, and have to give it an honest rating. Dragavan by dragavan on Apr 18, 2006
strongbad		Apr 16, 2006	Go slash it's your sister's birthday. by strongbad on Apr 16, 2006