Adventure omfg

Written by strongbad / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Battle12233344445555		Dec 25, 2017	I am living and breathing proof that some people's writing can be so awful It makes you want to blow your brains out. your story was so poorly written that there is literally only one thing in the world worse than this. And that is the infamous fanfic "My immortal" Jesus Christ man. I know that technically speaking every idea has already been thought up but you could at least combine two mediocre stories into one awesome story. That's how you get cool stuff like Abraham Lincoln vampire hunter and "hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy" look man it's not very hard by Battle12233344445555 on Dec 25, 2017
TheCandyMan		Aug 5, 2011	Very terrible quality. I can't actually believe I made it through that crap. Seriously, though, I found it harder to read than play. I just have to add out of reluctant honest, that, this is probably worse than one of magic's...I'm not entirely sure, and I don't want to cause myself any more harm by returning to one of hers...I suppose I'll have to give this another point for actually finishing it, though, and adding that 'retry' button. by TheCandyMan on Aug 5, 2011
magic		Nov 25, 2009	This story is not OMFG. It's retarded. by magic on Nov 25, 2009
Ghizzard		May 4, 2008	Anything you do kills you, and also what's up with all the damn insults when you die. Well here's an insult for you jerkward: your game sucks, your imagination sucks, your insulting ability sucks, YOU SUCK. by Ghizzard on May 4, 2008
Ghizzard		May 4, 2008	Pretty much everything you do kills you and you get insulted for it, well sorry for being in a game where you must die! by Ghizzard on May 4, 2008
superdeerman		Oct 15, 2007	by superdeerman on Oct 15, 2007
Leblanc4prez		Oct 12, 2007	??? by Leblanc4prez on Oct 12, 2007
EndMaster		Mar 7, 2007	This sucked OMFG LOL! by EndMaster on Mar 7, 2007
GuiltyGearX		Dec 13, 2006	There is only ONE thing, I think I've seen so far that is WORSE than this. And not that I'd waste my time making something like this. But If I ever chose to do so. ...It would be a whole hell of a lot better. Next time. Try being more, I don't know. CREATIVE. by GuiltyGearX on Dec 13, 2006
apotheosis		Jul 26, 2006	I'm kind of obligated because you gave yourself a ten. I would put it in the 4 range otherwise. by apotheosis on Jul 26, 2006
dragavan		Apr 27, 2006	Not a whole lot I can say about this other than it's mostly just more of that no writing, short room, boring crap that shows up on here in droves and then is summarily voted down into the gutter of the site by the voting public. Try putting in some descriptions, and actual story, and characterizations, and more than one line per room... Hell, you might even try to get a paragraph or two in per page... I mean, don't strain yourself or anything, but it would sure be nice. Also, I would have been nice and given this story a rating of 2 if it wasn't for the cardinal sin of the author giving their own obviously inferior story a rating of 10. Tisk tisk. For that you have earned yourself a whopping 1... and I really don't give 1s or 10's easily, so you should feel honored. by dragavan on Apr 27, 2006
strongbad		Apr 15, 2006	by strongbad on Apr 15, 2006
Joebwoy		Apr 8, 2006	it was ok for your 1st story. funny too by Joebwoy on Apr 8, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby		Apr 3, 2006	First of all - Yazzman, homer, and DEP should all be summarily executed for their complete and utter incompetance when it comes to rating this 'story'. Have you people lost your minds? Or were you just fucking retarded to begin with, and I was too fucking drunk/depressed/insane to realize it? Maybe you guys are like Dustin Hoffman in 'Rainman'. Well, I suppose I shouldn't be surprised. By anything. Hey 'strongbad', do us all a favor and... I won't say it. Do what I wish everyone else would do, okay? Do what I wish everyone else would do. Do what I wish I would do this very second. Die. Or at the very least, do not not write. Okay? In the very least, do not right. And if you're feel in a chipper mood, go ahead and die for me. by ChubbyTeletubby on Apr 3, 2006
donteatpoop		Apr 3, 2006	I was looking for adjectives, but I couldn't find any. When you discover adjecctives your stories might be readable. Oh, and as to the "retry" option YazZMaN was raving over, when you end the story properly you have two "retry" options: "Go to Beginning" (pretty what you used), and "Go to last page". So the retry button just wasn't necessary in my opinion. by donteatpoop on Apr 3, 2006
jeffisthebest		Apr 3, 2006	Yeah not so good, even for a first story. by jeffisthebest on Apr 3, 2006
Narcissus		Apr 3, 2006	by Narcissus on Apr 3, 2006
YazZMaN		Apr 2, 2006	It needs more description, more effort, and more storyline (unless you are trying to be this random). It gets a 6 because of the rather clever "retry" button which I've been hoping to see for some time now. Oh hell, since it's your first story, (I think) I'll knock it up to a 7. by YazZMaN on Apr 2, 2006