Comments & Ratings
||Jul 6, 2013|
||Feb 3, 2010||Very good but keep going :)|
||Jan 21, 2010||
I love your style! Your story drew me in and actually held my attention (if you knew me, you'd know that is a huge complement!) I followed your story as far as it would go, and then wanted to hear more. I hope you plan on continuing! I would have given you a ten except for I got confused at one point where the old/young man appeared in the cellar. He seemed to just pop out of nowhere so I'm thinking I didn't get his introdction or something...|
Anyway, good work! And thanks for the good read!
||Apr 15, 2007||really good!|
||Jan 30, 2006||I love this author. The story is well written and thorough. I can't wait until it's got a few nice endings.|
||Jan 9, 2006||
I honestly have never seen 24 rooms used SO incredibly perfectly. I think I went at least 12 levels deep!
Either I picked the exact right things or you looped a lot but I only noticed one...
||Dec 17, 2005||A beautifully crafted tale. Great use of pictures. But the pictures would be nothing without decent writing and you did very well in that department as well.|
||Oct 29, 2005||Good writing-nice pictures-few spelling errors-not much action.|
||Oct 10, 2005||Very nice work, Cat. Much better than version one. There's a lot of intrigue at work here.|
||Oct 5, 2005|