Get to the point!

Written by mangofox / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
DetectiveAlfred		Sep 12, 2014	by DetectiveAlfred on Sep 12, 2014
TheCandyMan		Jun 2, 2011	I agree with umm..ChubbyTeletubby and Usoki, let's just say I'll give you a 2. I liked the beginning, which is, yeah, what Usoki said, it is in fact 1:29 in the morning as you claimed! How strange..that's why I'm gonna give you a 3. by TheCandyMan on Jun 2, 2011
Infinate		Apr 28, 2010	by Infinate on Apr 28, 2010
Crimmy		Aug 11, 2009	by Crimmy on Aug 11, 2009
Alejate		Jun 18, 2008	You're right, I shouldn't be reading this. Buh-bye. by Alejate on Jun 18, 2008
Ghizzard		May 30, 2008	It's not late ATM tho.... by Ghizzard on May 30, 2008
KaticaLocke		Feb 26, 2008	by KaticaLocke on Feb 26, 2008
Armando322		Jul 14, 2007	Not bad... by Armando322 on Jul 14, 2007
Vesnicie		May 19, 2007	Why bother making a story like this? You call it "1 in the morning humor", I don't call it humor at all. If you're suffering from flatulence of the brain, get an etch-a-sketch and make crazy little designs or take a long bath with your head submerged, but please don't write a story. by Vesnicie on May 19, 2007
apotheosis		Nov 16, 2006	Not good. End of story. No further description required. by apotheosis on Nov 16, 2006
jeffisthebest		Oct 13, 2006	Shouldnt need to be explained. by jeffisthebest on Oct 13, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby		Jul 16, 2006	Bitch you give CRACK ATTACK a 1!!!! That's what we call, "fuckin' up", Bitch nigga faggot ass aid sucking semen swapper. You didn't even bother to leave a comment. Bitch die. Bitch die slow. Bicth die like a two-bit, mo' fuckin ho'... Who spit prematurely, came up short with the dough. Came up short and got POP! POP, with a .44! Bitch die like Hezbollah! Like Al'Qaeda! Like them Iraqi "freedom Fighters"! Die like Darth Vader! Like everyone else! Except so much sooner. Die like your mom, bitch. Her shit's like rotten tuna. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 16, 2006
donteatpoop		Jul 13, 2006	I've read more involved stories in bowls of alphabet soup. by donteatpoop on Jul 13, 2006
Usoki		Jul 11, 2006	The 'Author's Notes' at the beginning were amusing, and fairly clever. However, I soon realized that they weren't a hint at the greatness to come: They were the only part of the work that could even remotely be called funny. Here I am, awake at One o'clock in the morning as suggested in the story. It's not funny. There's not enough material here to be funny. You have a nice, random sense of humor, I think. I'm not sure, but a few one-choice room strings gave me hints that you do have that sort of humor. If you would expand each room beyond one or two sentences, this would be a lot better. by Usoki on Jul 11, 2006