Comments & Ratings
||Sep 12, 2014|
||Jun 2, 2011||I agree with umm..ChubbyTeletubby and Usoki, let's just say I'll give you a 2. I liked the beginning, which is, yeah, what Usoki said, it is in fact 1:29 in the morning as you claimed! How strange..that's why I'm gonna give you a 3.|
||Apr 28, 2010|
||Aug 11, 2009|
||Jun 18, 2008||You're right, I shouldn't be reading this. Buh-bye.|
||May 30, 2008||It's not late ATM tho....|
||Feb 26, 2008|
||Jul 14, 2007||Not bad...|
||May 19, 2007||Why bother making a story like this? You call it "1 in the morning humor", I don't call it humor at all. If you're suffering from flatulence of the brain, get an etch-a-sketch and make crazy little designs or take a long bath with your head submerged, but please don't write a story.|
||Nov 16, 2006||Not good. End of story. No further description required.|
||Oct 13, 2006||Shouldnt need to be explained.|
||Jul 16, 2006||
Bitch you give CRACK ATTACK a 1!!!!|
That's what we call, "fuckin' up", Bitch nigga faggot ass aid sucking semen swapper.
You didn't even bother to leave a comment.
Bitch die slow.
Bicth die like a two-bit, mo' fuckin ho'...
Who spit prematurely, came up short with the dough.
Came up short and got *POP! POP*, with a .44!
Bitch die like Hezbollah!
Like them Iraqi "freedom Fighters"!
Die like Darth Vader!
Like everyone else!
Except so much sooner.
Die like your mom, bitch.
Her shit's like rotten tuna.
||Jul 13, 2006||I've read more involved stories in bowls of alphabet soup.|
||Jul 11, 2006||
The 'Author's Notes' at the beginning were amusing, and fairly clever. However, I soon realized that they weren't a hint at the greatness to come: They were the only part of the work that could even remotely be called funny.|
Here I am, awake at One o'clock in the morning as suggested in the story. It's not funny. There's not enough material here to be funny. You have a nice, random sense of humor, I think. I'm not sure, but a few one-choice room strings gave me hints that you do have that sort of humor. If you would expand each room beyond one or two sentences, this would be a lot better.