The Whole World In Your Hands

Written by jeffisthebest / G: General Audiences / 7.40 (5 ratings) (5)
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Zac6251
Zac6251		 Mar 29, 2010
by Zac6251 on Mar 29, 2010
Jargner
Jargner		 May 19, 2007
by Jargner on May 19, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Feb 12, 2007
That 1 was completely uncalled for. I liked the story.
by apotheosis on Feb 12, 2007
Futurecast
Futurecast		 Dec 26, 2006
"look who came out of the US! Bill Gates and Stephen Hawking!"

Erm, you clearly haven't read this then:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steven_hawking

He isn't American.
by Futurecast on Dec 26, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 May 13, 2006
You really didn't deserve that one, jeff. This story is pretty good. Not my favorite by far, but good.
by donteatpoop on May 13, 2006
Storm
Storm		 Feb 4, 2006
Jesus Christ! Homer This Is a Desgrace!

I Can't Belive It!MAKE YOUR NEXT STORY BETTER!
by Storm on Feb 4, 2006
YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Dec 22, 2005
I'm not going to rate it yet since you noted that you didn't want to release it so quickly, and it's not complete, etc.

Anyways, back in the day, before we had authors like donteatpoop and chubbyteletubby, before we all evolved in our writing, I would have given this a 9 but now the bar has been raised so much that today I would probably give it a 7-8. It's not bad but I don't like the overall concept of how it's less like a descriptive story and more like a training course for world domination. But I that's what you were going for. Anyways, it was pretty good.

("The Item" CYOA version was still much better ;))
by YazZMaN on Dec 22, 2005

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