Comments & Ratings
||Apr 29, 2021||uhh I thought it was PG|
||Sep 16, 2011||Fun story. Lots of rooms and well written.|
||Apr 25, 2011||
It's really well written, I like the storyline, and it's a fun read, (I've wrote a few pages, glad to help) usually the stories on here are short and boring, but you make the extraneous material become relavent, well done! :D |
||Mar 31, 2009||This story would be epic if it was finished. I especially liked the ninjette parts and how many death scenes there were.|
||Sep 15, 2007||I never really got into this one for some reason, but a lot of effort was put into it and it's better than most stories on the site.|
||Jun 27, 2006||Woo ninjas!|
||May 2, 2006||Heheheheh :D|
||Mar 10, 2006||
Pretty good. For some reason, I thought I had read this story before and never bothered to check it out until I came across your "I'm rediculous" forum post.|
Here's how it compares to your other stories: The writing and description is worse, while the plot is much more suspenseful and gripping.
Stories that have an insane plot (not random) almost always get overlooked. People just don't realize how fucki'n fun they are. ; )
This is probably my second (or third) favorite story from you. It's at par with Paco Valdez.
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||Jan 13, 2006||weird but cool!!! ninja epidemic, that's something heh =P|
||Jan 2, 2006|
||Dec 4, 2005||Well done. The story has a good flow to it, and overall it's very enjoyable and amusing to read. Would have given a 10 if not for the typos.|
||Aug 10, 2005||This was the first one I put on the site and I am desperatley scrambling to tie up all the loose ends and wrap the story up. Any suggestions? (Not that anyone other than myself will ever read this fucking comment post.)|
||Aug 5, 2005||
Why am I compelled to read poop stories now? I can't fathom it. The majority is right, however.|
Concentrate on Paco, dang it. THERE'S your prize-winner.
||Jun 13, 2005||Let me know what you think! Tell me your favorite part(s) of the story and your least favorite(s). Leave it here in the comments section or shoot me an e-mail. Or completely ignore this shit, as will most likely be the outcome of it all.|
||May 31, 2005||I really thought it was about an 8... but i play D&D with this guy... and he's my DM... so i thought i'd boost his ego a bit! =b|
||May 28, 2005||I really liked this story, besides a few errors/typos it was really good. But you gave yourself a 10. I dont like that.|
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||May 24, 2005||
I enjoyed it. Reminds me of another book I once read, but I can't remember what it was. It had nothing to do with Ninjas. Just the style of writing, I guess.|
Not that that helps you in any way. JUst thought I'd say.
||May 23, 2005||Well done. Needs a little refining, but it was, for the most part, very amusing.|
||May 23, 2005||Pretty good story the grabs the readers attention leaving them to wonder what or who had been hit and as the story progresses the tension builds when you find your friend at home in bed, look foward to reading more!!|