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The Ninja Epidemic

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Author Rating Date Comment
jumperbumper
jumperbumper
Apr 29, 2021
uhh I thought it was PG
by jumperbumper on Apr 29, 2021
BatCountry
BatCountry
Sep 16, 2011
Fun story. Lots of rooms and well written.
by BatCountry on Sep 16, 2011
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
Apr 25, 2011
It's really well written, I like the storyline, and it's a fun read, (I've wrote a few pages, glad to help) usually the stories on here are short and boring, but you make the extraneous material become relavent, well done! :D

8/10 :)
by TheCandyMan on Apr 25, 2011
urnam0
urnam0
Mar 31, 2009
This story would be epic if it was finished. I especially liked the ninjette parts and how many death scenes there were.
by urnam0 on Mar 31, 2009
EndMaster
EndMaster
Sep 15, 2007
I never really got into this one for some reason, but a lot of effort was put into it and it's better than most stories on the site.
by EndMaster on Sep 15, 2007
Akira
Akira
Jun 27, 2006
Woo ninjas!
by Akira on Jun 27, 2006
Jurgenn
Jurgenn
May 2, 2006
Heheheheh :D
by Jurgenn on May 2, 2006
YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Mar 10, 2006
Pretty good. For some reason, I thought I had read this story before and never bothered to check it out until I came across your "I'm rediculous" forum post.

Here's how it compares to your other stories: The writing and description is worse, while the plot is much more suspenseful and gripping.

Stories that have an insane plot (not random) almost always get overlooked. People just don't realize how fucki'n fun they are. ; )

This is probably my second (or third) favorite story from you. It's at par with Paco Valdez.
by YazZMaN on Mar 10, 2006
missmelphis
missmelphis
Feb 14, 2006
by missmelphis on Feb 14, 2006
ayenigel
ayenigel
Jan 13, 2006
weird but cool!!! ninja epidemic, that's something heh =P
by ayenigel on Jan 13, 2006
Zackt
Zackt
Jan 2, 2006
by Zackt on Jan 2, 2006
funkymango
funkymango
Dec 4, 2005
Well done. The story has a good flow to it, and overall it's very enjoyable and amusing to read. Would have given a 10 if not for the typos.
by funkymango on Dec 4, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Aug 10, 2005
This was the first one I put on the site and I am desperatley scrambling to tie up all the loose ends and wrap the story up. Any suggestions? (Not that anyone other than myself will ever read this fucking comment post.)
by donteatpoop on Aug 10, 2005
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 5, 2005
Why am I compelled to read poop stories now? I can't fathom it. The majority is right, however.
Concentrate on Paco, dang it. THERE'S your prize-winner.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 5, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jun 13, 2005
Let me know what you think! Tell me your favorite part(s) of the story and your least favorite(s). Leave it here in the comments section or shoot me an e-mail. Or completely ignore this shit, as will most likely be the outcome of it all.
by donteatpoop on Jun 13, 2005
bilgemonster
bilgemonster
May 31, 2005
I really thought it was about an 8... but i play D&D with this guy... and he's my DM... so i thought i'd boost his ego a bit! =b
by bilgemonster on May 31, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
May 28, 2005
I really liked this story, besides a few errors/typos it was really good. But you gave yourself a 10. I dont like that.
by jeffisthebest on May 28, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
May 26, 2005
by donteatpoop on May 26, 2005
TheKoolAidGuy
TheKoolAidGuy
May 24, 2005
I enjoyed it. Reminds me of another book I once read, but I can't remember what it was. It had nothing to do with Ninjas. Just the style of writing, I guess.

Not that that helps you in any way. JUst thought I'd say.
by TheKoolAidGuy on May 24, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
May 23, 2005
Well done. Needs a little refining, but it was, for the most part, very amusing.
by ChubbyTeletubby on May 23, 2005
NCPolice55571
NCPolice55571
May 23, 2005
Pretty good story the grabs the readers attention leaving them to wonder what or who had been hit and as the story progresses the tension builds when you find your friend at home in bed, look foward to reading more!!
by NCPolice55571 on May 23, 2005

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