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The Hunter mission 1

Written by Joebwoy / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 7.33 (3 ratings) (3)
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dragavan
dragavan		 Feb 3, 2006
This story is mediocre, with several spelling and grammar errors (which I know I am not immune to), but does have a nice framework to it. If it had more detail, better characterization, and less "Do you pick A or B" rooms with almost no lines of text it could actually be a fun and interesting story.

As for the rating, I think this is fair. Although I was tempted to rate it lower since the author had the audacity to give himself a 10. I personally think authors should not be allowed to rate their own stories... But that's just me.
by dragavan on Feb 3, 2006
Joebwoy
Joebwoy		 Nov 10, 2005
nuff said
by Joebwoy on Nov 10, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Mar 6, 2005
Not bad. Not great. I think you could do better if you put a little more time into it. Try using quotation marks, too.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Mar 6, 2005

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