Loveology

Written by rootbeer667788 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
urnam0		Apr 5, 2024	by urnam0 on Apr 5, 2024
nevermindme		Apr 23, 2021	by nevermindme on Apr 23, 2021
Golden		Dec 7, 2019	For me, this is one of the most amazing stories for this section. I think I've just fallen in love with romance stories! The characters are pretty great and I love that there's not much conflict. There was also some suspense, which I love. I simply just think this is a great and detailed story. Other people may think differently, but this is crazy good in my opinion. Great job! by Golden on Dec 7, 2019
Tesserae109		Jul 28, 2019	great job!! Amazing story with a good concept. Although, it could be longer. Many choices and clean as well. Definitely a rare favorite! by Tesserae109 on Jul 28, 2019
celinastarfish		Mar 10, 2017	I really liked it I thought it was kinda short but it was nice having many choices. by celinastarfish on Mar 10, 2017
CanyonDragon		Jan 25, 2017	by CanyonDragon on Jan 25, 2017
MightyTie		Jul 29, 2015	by MightyTie on Jul 29, 2015
assassinsprincess		Jul 8, 2015	is perfect enough??! Beautiful!! by assassinsprincess on Jul 8, 2015
twelveazaleas		Jun 17, 2015	I'm new to this site and this is one of the few I have read that is ultimately delighful! I love it, and I'm at lost for words on how I could love it even more. It's rare to see a finished piece like this. Although I found it very short, I can also say I want more. More of these please? And I know it's such a chore to write multiple routes all at once (considering your number of chapters), it would also be great to make it longer, for the reader to really get to know the guy because it has such a fast pace. Other than that, it is brilliant. Thank you for the great read. by twelveazaleas on Jun 17, 2015
Vesnicie		Nov 10, 2014	On the plus side, you've built the story to maximize the interactive function, with no visibly broken connections or false loops. It is fun and easy to read, with no gratuitous gore or rudeness, which is a rare treat. You struck a good balance between page length and description, both of which matched the tone and intentions of your story. Where this could use some more work is primarily in character and plot development. It was extremely predictable, with the bold, obvious choice invariably yielding the best, most decisive outcome. I really thought there would be some sort of plot twist with Malcolm, a bait-and-switch maybe, where Malcolm would prove to be inappropriate husband material (Gay? Already pledged to one of the two mysterious lovelies you saw with him in town?), but where acquaintance with him would lead directly to someone else. As it happens, these three suitors are only incidentally connected, which makes the story feel quite linear despite the effective use of CYOA. There are also many grammar mistakes and misspellings throughout. The story is redeemed by being finished, fun and easy on the mind. by Vesnicie on Nov 10, 2014
Floatingclouds		Nov 8, 2014	by Floatingclouds on Nov 8, 2014