The Paradox Factor

Written by Lucid / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Tesserae109	Aug 25, 2019	I can’t stop reading this thing lol! by Tesserae109 on Aug 25, 2019
Tesserae109	Aug 8, 2019	Wow.... I don’t even know where to start! Just amazing. I think that you are a great writer and should keep on writing-your other stories are also some of the best stories on the site. by Tesserae109 on Aug 8, 2019
kayleeforbes	Jan 29, 2019	This was easily the best story that I have read so far on Infinite story. I have been reading stories on this website for awhile, but this story actually got me to create an account to rate it. Its so fun to read and to try and figure out. My compliments to the author. by kayleeforbes on Jan 29, 2019
DSNYDER	Jan 10, 2019	This was an amazing story and got me thinking. It was a great mystery! by DSNYDER on Jan 10, 2019
kaykime	Jul 16, 2015	by kaykime on Jul 16, 2015
Madbrad200	May 19, 2014	by Madbrad200 on May 19, 2014
laughingcloset	Mar 22, 2014	Amazing :O by laughingcloset on Mar 22, 2014
subty13	Nov 18, 2013	This is without a doubt the best story I've read on the site so far. I gave it a nine because someone might make a better story one day, but for now, this is the best story I've read. I think I've pieced pretty much the whole story together. by subty13 on Nov 18, 2013
Keter	Sep 5, 2012	by Keter on Sep 5, 2012
Futurecast	Dec 29, 2011	by Futurecast on Dec 29, 2011
TheCandyMan	Jun 3, 2011	Wow..I've nearly managed to uncover what's happened. Truly amazing. There's this 'I need to know what's going on! Why was Bill pointing his gun at me?' Thought flooding my brain, forcing me to click through what I think I don't know and look through this guy's memories.. by TheCandyMan on Jun 3, 2011
Celvis	Aug 18, 2010	by Celvis on Aug 18, 2010
bsal	Feb 2, 2010	by bsal on Feb 2, 2010
AStreamOfStars	Jan 20, 2010	Absolutely wonderful, in every way.One of maybe three stories where i have actually bonded with the characters and felt true wonder as I read. There should be more story's of this quality in the world. by AStreamOfStars on Jan 20, 2010
cappstv	Jan 19, 2010	Poor monkey by cappstv on Jan 19, 2010
Milianotus	Oct 23, 2009	Wonderful. I can't say anything else. by Milianotus on Oct 23, 2009
urnam0	Jul 29, 2009	I read this story years ago, forgot to rate it. The best story I've read on this site. 10/10. by urnam0 on Jul 29, 2009
Cat2000	Aug 9, 2008	I've read through everything, I think, and am still confused by what's going on - but that only makes the story better, I think. You did a great job on this! by Cat2000 on Aug 9, 2008
Hagbard	Mar 13, 2008	by Hagbard on Mar 13, 2008
Riven	Mar 9, 2008	by Riven on Mar 9, 2008
jtoya85	Nov 15, 2007	i like where the story is going but i could piece some things together at the end. if anyone could help me send me a PM please. by jtoya85 on Nov 15, 2007
Duruke	Oct 9, 2007	by Duruke on Oct 9, 2007
deltasabre	Oct 3, 2007	Wow this story is pretty good!!! Took awhile and it is very interesting, I like it very much by deltasabre on Oct 3, 2007
Xane	Jul 17, 2007	Wow. I think I got the story and It's AWESOME! :D by Xane on Jul 17, 2007
Vesnicie	Jun 24, 2007	I had been avoiding this one for awhile out of sheer intimidation. I'm glad I finally got around to it. My usual gripe would be to beef up the narrative more, but I understand this would be inappropriate in a "fragmented" story such as this one. What the story lacks in purely literary merits is made up for in complex orchestration and a very successful use of the CYOA format for "The Memento Factor". by Vesnicie on Jun 24, 2007
Leblanc4prez	Jun 17, 2007	Woah... This is with out a doubt the best Sci-Fi story on this site. I love things that make all three of my brains tingle with confusion and thought. God dam I love you! by Leblanc4prez on Jun 17, 2007
Futurecast	Dec 26, 2006	An utterly bizarre flawed masterpiece. by Futurecast on Dec 26, 2006
apotheosis	Aug 18, 2006	A good story having to do with advanced theoretical quantum physics and a puzzle all in one! A 10 for sure. by apotheosis on Aug 18, 2006
Drano5050	Aug 12, 2006	This is by far the most brilliant story I've read on this site, hands down. by Drano5050 on Aug 12, 2006
dnukem	May 18, 2006	This is a very well written story. Very confusing but you wrote in the beginning that it was supposed to be that way. by dnukem on May 18, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 12, 2005	A brilliant idea with poor execution is a scourge. The reader of this story will always be thinking the exposition could be more fluid, the narratives clearer, and the descriptions ARE allowed to make sense and be cumulative, even in a Sci-Fi memory/time travel story. This is like a succulent filet mignon with all the trimmings served in a dirty dog dish. Nearly inexcusable. by michaelrayholt on Aug 12, 2005
MagicalMuggle	Jul 19, 2005	by MagicalMuggle on Jul 19, 2005
MagicalMuggle	Jul 19, 2005	I think I get it! I really think I get it! Very good story--very tricky too. Initially, I was completely confused and ready to give up, but then something clicked and I began to start putting the pieces together. Anyway, I have to say, you are brilliant, dude. by MagicalMuggle on Jul 19, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Jul 10, 2005	I don't know how I missed this story before. Very original. A little TOO fragmented, in my opinion, but I can't bring myself to dock you a point for that. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 10, 2005
YazZMaN	Jul 5, 2005	by YazZMaN on Jul 5, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 2, 2005	Very well written. Nice job. by donteatpoop on Jun 2, 2005
luckysnake23	Mar 23, 2005	by luckysnake23 on Mar 23, 2005
MiniCorr	Jan 26, 2005	I think when you end the story, you should include a summary for the confused reader. Just to tie down any loose ends. Confusing or not, this was an awesome story. by MiniCorr on Jan 26, 2005
EnderWiggin	Jan 3, 2005	This is quite simply the best story on this site. It is very confusing, and intentionally so. I'm a fan of the time travel sub-genre of scifi and this story is professional quality. Good job! by EnderWiggin on Jan 3, 2005
DavidSky	Jan 2, 2005	Good story that works well with the format. It got a little confusing though--you really need to be careful and read every single entry, which ended forcing me to struggle to remember what I'd selected and what I hadn't. I think if the story had been spelled out just a little bit more, my own personal feelings of frustration would have been lessened. by DavidSky on Jan 2, 2005
jeffisthebest	Dec 22, 2004	I don't know how you thought of this while you were half-sleeping, but its good, very good. by jeffisthebest on Dec 22, 2004
AlphaDog	Nov 29, 2004	Excellent use of cyoa format, really captures the first person pov of an amnesiac. by AlphaDog on Nov 29, 2004
AlphaDog	Nov 29, 2004	Well done! Excellent use of the online format to allow the reader to experience the disorientation of the unfortunate protagonist. Very disturbing without being graphic. The best story on this site that I've read. by AlphaDog on Nov 29, 2004
Karold	Nov 13, 2004	Dude, holy shit... very nice idea, incredible writing, and the story is just so fun... This IS the best story on the site I have read so far (and I have read many). This reminds of several movies I have seen. The only flaw was that there wasn't 'quite' so much gameplay as I had hoped for. by Karold on Nov 13, 2004
Ravenchild	Nov 4, 2004	by Ravenchild on Nov 4, 2004
TerrapinKing	Aug 17, 2004	Seriously, this person is one of the best storytellers I have ever encountered. What a mind job..... by TerrapinKing on Aug 17, 2004
Ziff26966	Aug 10, 2004	by Ziff26966 on Aug 10, 2004
baz	Aug 6, 2004	Booyah by baz on Aug 6, 2004
Spider1234	Jul 23, 2004	Fabulous by Spider1234 on Jul 23, 2004
Spider1234	Jul 23, 2004	Very interesting story by Spider1234 on Jul 23, 2004
WarlordRak	Jul 13, 2004	All I can say is "Wow!" That was a very cool story. It took some doing, but I think I managed to piece it all together. by WarlordRak on Jul 13, 2004

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