Make your own adventure

Written by slezak2003 / NR: Not Rated / 6.80 (5 ratings) (5)
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Alejate
Alejate		 Jun 11, 2008
I've been looking around for an infinite story that I would feel very comfortable adding a new room to. A story that is fun and full of possibilities, yet not the usual dumb "one morning, you wake up--" thing. And yeah, I've found the right one in your story. :)
by Alejate on Jun 11, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Aug 18, 2006
Needs more effort and more content.
by apotheosis on Aug 18, 2006
Dan2
Dan2		 Mar 16, 2006
by Dan2 on Mar 16, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Dec 10, 2005
Hey, someone's lucky NCP helped him!
by jeffisthebest on Dec 10, 2005
Rpgxper
Rpgxper		 Jul 19, 2004
Great work sleazak! This story can be even better with a little more work and effort. Perhaps adding some more pictures will make it more exciting and engaging.
by Rpgxper on Jul 19, 2004

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