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Ratings & Comments

Wow...this was truly a tour-de-force of the Batman comics. Wonderful!
Good story...not that anything you write is ever bad. :)
The Paradox Factor by Lucid Jan 3, 2005
This is quite simply the best story on this site. It is very confusing, and intentionally so. I'm a fan of the time travel sub-genre of scifi and this story is professional quality. Good job!
Crazy Dream by emmabear11 Jun 17, 2004
This story is weird...its not particularly compelling as they go on this site but it is kind of funny...so I'll be generous with my rating!
Risky Business by rockitten Jun 4, 2004
Pointless story with little depth...but I'll give it a couple of points because one of my good friends is in Sigma Nu.
Blind Date by Lucid May 25, 2004
I love the continuity! This is the best story of its kind on this site.
Generally good writing, but tired subject matter.
Absolutely terrible.
Well done! This is pure Bond. I really like the double entendres. Anyway, keep up the good work.
I'm a Pornstar by MrDuncan Feb 23, 2004
Come on dude...this is terrible.
Nice story. I look forward to reading more.
Wild Night by SirShaguar Feb 1, 2004
The best of its genre...the genre being immature sexcapades. Sure, its mostly infantile, but its still a fun one.
The Corporate Ladder by severenz Jan 23, 2004
Vixen Manor by CelticFrostQueen Jan 23, 2004
Wow...this story is sure something...I'm going to have to check back later and see if things continue to...um...progress! ;)
Ninja by Mydeskiscool Jan 23, 2004
Dude...Ninjas are sweet.
This is a classic story on this site. It also gets points for being complete. However, the rooms don't contain much text. For some reason, perfectly good choices lead to bad ends and the girls name changes inexplicably in different threads.
The Big 1 by NCPolice55571 Jan 14, 2004
I think this story is innovative and incredible, but then again, I'm a bit biased since I'm one of the writers.
Fish Quest by CJW Jan 14, 2004
I love it! Show me more!
Good first story! I suggest breaking some of the longer passages into shorter paragraphs. In a setting such as this, smaller "bite size" offerings are easier to follow than long stretches of text.
mientes tan bien by darynkatina Jan 13, 2004
Me gusta mucha las cuentas hispanola, pero donde esta las otras salas?
Pretty darn good. I can't wait to see more!
Another Classic CYOA online story. Not particularly good by today's story standards, but I'll give it a 7 simply because its a guilty pleasure.
This is a strange story. I would give it a 7 simply because it is classic (for this site). The quality of writing varies wildly throughout the story, but is at times quite good.
The Russian Chick by TNightwish Jan 12, 2004
This is one of the best written stories on the site. Its a little confusing at times, but still really high quality.
Forest by Ketchupyupchup Jan 12, 2004
Looks like a promising start. The writing is smart and the descriptions are fluid. I recommend a little grammer editing, though.
Pseudos by CelticFrostQueen Jan 12, 2004
The story is well written. My main problem is the type of choices that ask whether or not soemthing will happen to your character. Choices should be strictly based on your choices not their outcome.
Time Traveller by AgentRebellion Jan 11, 2004
This story is awesome! I'll give props to NCPolice as well for making this a great time travel adventure!
In your Dreams by cheese4face Jan 11, 2004
Don't release stories until they have enough rooms to make them interesting. Also, your two choices should be actions...not possibilities.
College by JackJackosn Jan 10, 2004
This story isn't particularly good. It doesn't even seem to be about college.
Really captures the flavor of drag racing...and you clearly know your cars! Good job!
Hired Assasin by NCPolice55571 Jan 9, 2004
The pictures kick a**. This is the best illustrated story on the site.
Snowbound! by CJW Jan 9, 2004
This was an average story. It didn't really engage me and is certainly not the best teen romance story on this site. Still, it was far from bad.

It needs to have a little more meat to it and be more interesting.

Props, though, to the different character perspective!