Creeper909

Oh. It was a horror/thriller. I thought it was the last re-run of Elmo's Halloween Special (or whatever it is.) Dear God, please stop this nonsense. It's going to be the Death of me...

Holy s***, this is terrible.

EPIC!!!

So. Short. So stupid.

I like the idea of World War II as the topic, but at least make a better story out of it. Im giving you a 3 to make up for the other guy who just left a 1 without a comment. It really doesn't deserver a 3. ...

And by the way, this portion of the story took little time.

Also, I looked at my Life in the ARMY story, and a few of those paragraphs had 11, and even 18 lines.

So I have no idea what you're talking about.

I respect your comment, even though I do not agree. But I would like to see YOU write a thorough story, detailed and all, like with my Escape the Mothership and Life in the Army.

I would like to let you know I'm writing 3 books at the moment so Infinite Story time is limited for me. And the 1st Idiots test was nice, people liked it, and with this one I'm not even finished yet. And I would also like to let you know that 2 of my stories I created quite a while back are highly detailed and have not 1, 2, 3, or even 5 lines, but more like 8 or nine 9 on most occasions.

I am fixing a few "problems" on this story before I work on I's.T. 2. I have read the ratings + comments and I am fixing most of these problems. Problems that would take too long or would mess up the story are going to be added on the sequel of this Idiot's Test 2. (I's.T. 2)

So, thanks for the feedback! :)

Thanks! I'm going to most likely fix those problems but I never realized I made the bottom answer right so many times. Dino I'll add you to the scoreboard. P.S. You're in first place.

SparklingBeavis I finished the story... What was your score?

You may be in 1st place!

I give credit to my friend Ravenclawz for some of the rooms. Thank you.


(P.S. This was my 1st story.

Why do I have 2 ratings on this?


Why?

If you have seen my other reviews on my stories that are supposed to be "funny", the, another review for you. (Hey, that rhymes!) But I am also disappointed with this one too, so ignore my low-rated stories. Instead, check out idiot's test! It's better than (almost) all my stories put together!

I am disappointed with my own story.


WORST


STORY

EVER

Hey, you know that other story I said about? Well, it's Idiot's Test. And you know what, I hate my own story. I mean, it's OK, but still... it's not good. So I rate it terrible.

I am still working on this story, and I plan for it to be a lot longer.


Enjoy!


:)

I gotta, rate my own story to get it good, I will.

The only available class is Knight right now. Feel free to add!

Wow this was funny. I like that JoeMon150 gave you little facts about stuff to keep you occupied. Some of them were funny. You did a good job JoeMon150. Keep it up

So, your dad set the whole thing up. But enraged monkeys? What, is your dad an insane guy trying to kill you? why would your dad set up a joke with enraged monkeys that rip you apart and eat your remains? Stupid.

Hey Jazz, there are loose ends, like on the gun picking in the armory. Just to let you know.

It was good! To many loose ends, though. Keep on going, Apotheosis! (Did I spell or name wrong? Is it Apothoesis? Nah, I think I got it right the first time. :3 )

Are you kidding me?! This story was sheer lunacy. Pure stupidity. The choices were dumb, and the topic of each one, terrible!

Good so far. It needs more rooms, but, AriKras, you are doing great. Keep up the good work!

I say this again, this was sheer lunacy. Sheer, lunacy.

What was this story?. Was it supposed to be like this virus sneeze that goes around possessing people? Or was this pepper thingy- OK, I'm gonna stop here, because there's no point talking about this for an hour. So, to sum it up, I didn't see the point.

That, was pure lunacy.

Eh, I guess it was OK. But in the beginning,when you call up your friends, and they want to hang out with you, one of the choices was: Die. I mean, die? Really? Who would commit suicide for your friends wanting to hang out with you. That's sheer lunacy.

This, was terrible.

Very nice! Cat just needs to finish it. Good work, Cat!

This, made me laugh. Muffins, it doesn't really have any point to it, but, I guess it's pretty good. Great for humor.

Good!

Eh, It's okay, but not the best.

It has real potential. Pretty good. I like it. ravenclawz, keep working on it.

How in the world do you get to the car race? I signed up for a job, I got the money, and I went to the car store. I would have had like 7 grand but it said I only had 4 GRAND!

Come ON. Too many loose ends.(I have meany loose ends in SOME of my stories, but I work on multiple at a time.) You had the right idea, though. Keep working on it!

Eh, OK, I guess. WAY too many loose ends, though. Try to add on, Draco, and yo might undergo some popularity, like, NCPolice and Cat2000 and EndMaster.(All those guys' stories are ones I like to read, oh, and Vesnicie, apothosis,and donteatpoop.). So yeah, this is to ALL you guys out there, you can be like THEM (I'm trying to be have some popularity, too). All you guys (MIGHT) have some potentiol out in your stories.

TERRIBLE. Absolutely TERRIBLE. -_-

This is nice. It is the story of Adam and Eve and how sin entered the world. Very nice.

I read it through a bit more, and I wasn't very much amused anymore. Well, I see if you wanted to make a humor clip thing, but, next time, MAKE AN ACTUAL STORY!!

Eh, I've got to give you credit. It was pretty funny, considering the plot of every room was "PUSH THE RED BUTTON!" Yeah, so, pretty good.

Oh come ON. You really need to put more thought and effort into it.

Fantastic! I highly recommend this story. I just finished it! Really good.

I know I put on TWO ratings for my own story, one DOESN'T count, because I wasn't paying attention and a rated my own story instead of the one I was supposed to. Please tell me how to delete comments and stuff!

Terrible. I hated it. Bad grammar. Not well though out. I'm gonna read some of Cat200 and EndMaster and all those good people out there's stories. Also, this was all hippie, texting style, not book style.

This was PATHETIC. Bro, you need to use better grammar. PLUS, it is not well written and I went back to the Infinite Story homepage before I got to room 3. Terrible.

SO MANY LOOSE ENDS!BRO, YOU NEED MORE ROOMS! I do approve of that "Another TUESDAY Morning" thing. I have read Another Monday Morning and it was PATHETIC. I mean, who keeps and M9 in their pocket? Who kicks the police in the face? Who looks for pictures of his boss and his wife? A CRIMINAL. So I am giving you a nice 5.

Hi guys I'm sorry I don't have a lot of rooms for some of the choices, but I will continue working on it. :)

Hey, I continued it. I am going on with it. But, I can't work on 10 stories at the same time (oh yes, I can!), so I need to help Cat work on this. Besides, she is my friend.

Actually pretty good! Just needs to be quite a bit longer. Otherwise, it was good.

Pretty bad. This should be rated R or MA. This is definitely not G. Bad words ARE included.

I FINISHED IT THERE ACTUALLY IS A ENDING IT WAS SAD BUT GOOD!!!!!!!

Very nice!

I have to say, this is SO long. But even better, it is SO good. I would read this a billion times a DAY.

Nice

Needs way more rooms. Needs improvements.

Of course. I just picked a random rating. It's my story for cryin' out loud!!!

I'm not doing this because i'm your friend. I doing it because IT WAS SO GOOD! Keep up the good work!

Hey! That's my story!

I gave this an average, because I'm pretty sure it was a good story. I have no idea what's going on 'cause it was not in English.