BearBipolarBear

Thanks for the advice Sev! I try to be a better beer drinker every day.

Oh heavens, this was not such a good story. Very short rooms and lack of meaningful choices, combined with random acts of violence made me, a caring bear, feel sorrow for the sake of mankind. Please try to find some beauty in life, as well as some writing ability.

Oh heavens! This is really a dreadful story, and completely lost on people who aren't Naruto fans. Also, I'm afraid it is bad form to rate your own story. Please do better next time.

There is no story here! Otherwise it might have been "beary" good indeed. So sorry, but please create a new story with this name and then I shall read and yea, rate again!

I had it on good authority from a friend that THIS was THE story to check out beyond the first page of top-rated stories. I am beary glad that I did! This wooded idyll reminds me so of my own forest dreams. The very blood of my veins seems to tingle with the wisdom contained within your prose. You understand the ways of the wood, of the fey, and of all the living creatures. I salute you!

You are to be commended, Mr. BatCountry, for this very thorough freshman outing in the world of Infinite Story. Although this is not technically your first story, it was the one to which you devoted the most effort and which you bravely submitted to the contest. The plot is complex, the characters interesting, and the word count voluminous, all things which speak stridently in your favor. You do have some room to approve, especially in the reworking of certain sentence structures which are slightly awkward. Nonetheless, I think you deserve a 10 because I know, perhaps better than most, just what potential you possess. Onward, Sir Bat, to literary greatness!

Ahoy, Contest Winner! I must commend you for an excellent effort most smashingly well executed! In this triumphant story, you have woven suspense, high thrills, mystery, friendship, righteous endeavor and peerless courage into a fine and seamless tapestry of literary merit. I tip my cloche to you, good sir!

Oh! Oh heavens! I must say this story does ruffle my fur just the slightest bit. Yet I also believe that this sense of offense can best be attributed to Vesnicie's keen critical eye and sense of satire. This is droll and apt, yea, t'is of the finest authorial quality. Ten points!