KingMalice

Wow. I was just checking out random stories when this came up, and I'm telling you it completely caught my attention. It was very compelling. Definitely one of my top three stories on the site

This probably is the mostinterested I've been in an unfinished story. I'd love to help out in a couple of romms, (I love the zombie genre.) but it seems you got some pretty cool plans in motion and I would hate to mess with that. Message me if there's anything I can do to help.

It was funny

I liked it. It stayed true to the heart of Death Note,plus grammar and speling both were very good. Can't wait to read more.

I really liked the picture of that crazy dog.

It was pretty funny

Definitley off to a good start.

I'm a huge fan of the werewolf genre so I'm a little biased but loved the story. It had a very Jhon Landish feel to it (writer and director of the original american werewolf in london). Definitley looking forward to reading more and maybe add a bit to it.

It was good. I don't think it really deserves a 10 but I hate when people give you a 1 without any comment. So this should even you out

unfinished and private. A story never written

finish this story

I would have just nailed bully with a tire iorn. The End

I think the comment about how the story needing to be short and sweet is hilarios and completly contradictory to the whole ideal of the story. It's like if when they built the great wall of china someone saying "Kind of long isn't it". That's the point

I curse you random story button

Excellent read can't wait til it's finished

It was fun

great story can't wait til you finish it

Great story really enjoyed reading it couple times

I like that this story has no sustenance, it's fun for when I have writers block

I thought this was pretty cool I'm a huge fan of the torture genre. Keep up the good work