Everything Went Dark
Straight! Yes! That's definitely the right way to go, right? Well...there's a reason why I said right so much and it's not because you picked the right path. Elliana went straight. As she continued to go forwards, she felt like the vent she as in was getting smaller. She brushed it off, assuming that it was just her not being used o crawling through vents. She had a gut feeling to turn around, but it was much too late for that. But, she should have listened to her instincts. The vent was getting smaller. And smaller. And Elliana had to stop crawling and laid on her stomach to try to inch through.
And finally, just as she felt like she couldn't breath from the tightness of the vent, Elliana felt a really strong gust of wind. Yes! That was good news! She shimmied along as fast as she could. She saw a vent flap thing up ahead. Behind it was a blue thing. What was it? Once she had gotten to it, Elliana rammed the vent door open with her elbows and then realized...oh no. The UFO was going really fast, which meant the air was insanely powerful. Elliana was sucked out and she fell. She landed on a freeway, bits of her going everywhere. She was somehow still alive--oh. Not anymore. A car had driven directly over her. Everything went dark.
And finally, just as she felt like she couldn't breath from the tightness of the vent, Elliana felt a really strong gust of wind. Yes! That was good news! She shimmied along as fast as she could. She saw a vent flap thing up ahead. Behind it was a blue thing. What was it? Once she had gotten to it, Elliana rammed the vent door open with her elbows and then realized...oh no. The UFO was going really fast, which meant the air was insanely powerful. Elliana was sucked out and she fell. She landed on a freeway, bits of her going everywhere. She was somehow still alive--oh. Not anymore. A car had driven directly over her. Everything went dark.