Arctic Adventure
January 18th-19th, warm and sunny
Dear Diary:
Today was my last day of my research trip sadly so I want this to be a good last day. I walked out the door and started to walked no "ed" somewhere I didn't know. I walked metres and metres away I didn't know where I was going so I stop for a drink but I saw some faded grey thing in the distances no "s" I thought its "it" was just a rock but it moved so I went it investigate once I got closer and closer it got darker grey colour. Once I got close enough I saw what is was is was what happened here? "is was is was"? a polar seal but a baby I took it back to the research lab to take care of it or research about it needs full stop and new sentence here firstly I checked its teeth the baby don't have sharp teeth like the adults do but still sharp. Then I checked if its hurt but nothing was wrong. Then finally I checked the body is was slimy, wet and smooth the flipper is small not like the adult. Nothing was wrong so I send "sent" it out a "to" sea.
Once I got back home I started to back "pack" my bags to go home.
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Feels very rushed for a final chapter, really needed some reflection about the whole trip and what you learned and how you felt overall. Lack of a reflection or summary makes this a poor ending to your story, which is a shame because you started so well! 4 out of 10]
Dear Diary:
Today was my last day of my research trip sadly so I want this to be a good last day. I walked out the door and started to walked no "ed" somewhere I didn't know. I walked metres and metres away I didn't know where I was going so I stop for a drink but I saw some faded grey thing in the distances no "s" I thought its "it" was just a rock but it moved so I went it investigate once I got closer and closer it got darker grey colour. Once I got close enough I saw what is was is was what happened here? "is was is was"? a polar seal but a baby I took it back to the research lab to take care of it or research about it needs full stop and new sentence here firstly I checked its teeth the baby don't have sharp teeth like the adults do but still sharp. Then I checked if its hurt but nothing was wrong. Then finally I checked the body is was slimy, wet and smooth the flipper is small not like the adult. Nothing was wrong so I send "sent" it out a "to" sea.
Once I got back home I started to back "pack" my bags to go home.
[Marked by Alex 22/02 Feels very rushed for a final chapter, really needed some reflection about the whole trip and what you learned and how you felt overall. Lack of a reflection or summary makes this a poor ending to your story, which is a shame because you started so well! 4 out of 10]
