you're a wrestler

Written by danmansmith / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
MagicPen	May 10, 2004	While the concept is original, and the terminology pursuasive, the lack of description is fatal to this story. I would urge more descriptions and more detailed choices so that the story becomes more vivid. The opponent, especially, needs to seem more daunting. by MagicPen on May 10, 2004
RoiKuro	May 5, 2004	by RoiKuro on May 5, 2004
INinja	May 4, 2004	Good for your first story. by INinja on May 4, 2004