Kung Fu fighting 2

Written by INinja / NR: Not Rated / 2.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 17, 2007
More description, more information, a little proofreading, more coherency in the plot, motives, some action, more substance.

It needs all of these things.
by apotheosis on Jun 17, 2007

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