Maze of death

Comments & Ratings

Author Rating Date Comment
Armando322
Armando322
Jul 17, 2007
I was expecting alot more from this one.
by Armando322 on Jul 17, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
Dec 9, 2006
I love mazes, and text adventure mazes are no exception BUT there was absolutely no effort in this maze. It was small, pointless, had bad grammar and was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to easy to solve. Next time make it bigger or more detailed.
by apotheosis on Dec 9, 2006
writer22
writer22
Oct 30, 2006
Yea it needs substance. no real plot, I undersand its a maze but you could develop the rooms alittle more. this seems to be just a luck game rather then a story.
by writer22 on Oct 30, 2006
Dan2
Dan2
Mar 14, 2006
by Dan2 on Mar 14, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Feb 27, 2006
AWFUL! IN EVERY WAY! It's just a click game!
by jeffisthebest on Feb 27, 2006
Cab
Cab
Jan 17, 2005
by Cab on Jan 17, 2005
Karold
Karold
Nov 23, 2004
This story is interesting, being that it is a maze but I say that it's below average because the rooms are shorter than 1 line, (which is okay sometimes, but not when you completely kill events and detail) It DOES strongly lack detail, your writing skills need some damned work, and nothing that caught my eye happened!
by Karold on Nov 23, 2004
algrewehou
algrewehou
Sep 12, 2004
The concept of a maze is really cool. But I prefer to have more skill involved, such as riddles and the such, to help me. Also, I luckily finished it on my first try. (Note, I said luckily). You really should make the correct path much longer. I hope this helps you improve on your future stories.
by algrewehou on Sep 12, 2004

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