Maze of death
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Armando322 |
Jul 17, 2007 | I was expecting alot more from this one. | |
apotheosis |
Dec 9, 2006 | I love mazes, and text adventure mazes are no exception BUT there was absolutely no effort in this maze. It was small, pointless, had bad grammar and was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to easy to solve. Next time make it bigger or more detailed. | |
writer22 |
Oct 30, 2006 | Yea it needs substance. no real plot, I undersand its a maze but you could develop the rooms alittle more. this seems to be just a luck game rather then a story. | |
Dan2 |
Mar 14, 2006 | ||
jeffisthebest |
Feb 27, 2006 | AWFUL! IN EVERY WAY! It's just a click game! | |
Cab |
Jan 17, 2005 | ||
Karold |
Nov 23, 2004 | This story is interesting, being that it is a maze but I say that it's below average because the rooms are shorter than 1 line, (which is okay sometimes, but not when you completely kill events and detail) It DOES strongly lack detail, your writing skills need some damned work, and nothing that caught my eye happened! | |
algrewehou |
Sep 12, 2004 | The concept of a maze is really cool. But I prefer to have more skill involved, such as riddles and the such, to help me. Also, I luckily finished it on my first try. (Note, I said luckily). You really should make the correct path much longer. I hope this helps you improve on your future stories. |