Robbers of the Dead

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Author	Date	Comment
braadr	Apr 19, 2022	by braadr on Apr 19, 2022
d3r3113	May 5, 2020	cool by d3r3113 on May 5, 2020
Calen	Dec 31, 2008	There's not much to say. A. The fact that you're blinded (literally) by a pyramid would cause it to be a major health hazard to anyone who happened to walk by. B. The rooms are often too short. C. The story doesn't progress with much plot. On the up side, it is a good idea and you executed it fairly well, but it needs a lot of improvement. MY REVIEW ENDS HERE. by Calen on Dec 31, 2008
Leblanc4prez	Jun 17, 2007	A resonable story. by Leblanc4prez on Jun 17, 2007
donteatpoop	Dec 12, 2005	Not terrible, but I did read some things that bothered me a little. For instance, on the first page why would you have the option of what time of day you choose to rob the place if one of them is going to immediatley end anyway? That's just stupid. Then when choose to go at night, the picture of the pyramid is clearly a daytime picture. If you're going to do shit like that, don't put a picture in. Those were right in the beginning, so it was a bit of a struggle for me to get into the story. While the premise is promising, the story delivers it in short rooms and abrupt endings. Not my cup of tea, by donteatpoop on Dec 12, 2005
michaelrayholt	Aug 4, 2005	Starts off really well, but the remaining rooms are way too short. Check your spelling, too. by michaelrayholt on Aug 4, 2005
Karold	Nov 19, 2004	You are very imformative on pyramid history in the begining (nice!) and the stroy is also fully completed (something I have come to largely respect). However, the rooms were quite short, there weren't quite enough exciting things, and you lose just because it's daytime??? by Karold on Nov 19, 2004
Shabti	Apr 5, 2004	Excellent story! by Shabti on Apr 5, 2004
Rampage57	Mar 15, 2004	by Rampage57 on Mar 15, 2004

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