Comments & Ratings
||May 5, 2020||cool|
||Dec 31, 2008||
There's not much to say. |
A. The fact that you're blinded (literally) by a pyramid would cause it to be a major health hazard to anyone who happened to walk by.
B. The rooms are often too short.
C. The story doesn't progress with much plot.
On the up side, it is a good idea and you executed it fairly well, but it needs a lot of improvement.
MY REVIEW ENDS HERE.
||Jun 17, 2007||A resonable story.|
||Dec 12, 2005||Not terrible, but I did read some things that bothered me a little. For instance, on the first page why would you have the option of what time of day you choose to rob the place if one of them is going to immediatley end anyway? That's just stupid. Then when choose to go at night, the picture of the pyramid is clearly a daytime picture. If you're going to do shit like that, don't put a picture in. Those were right in the beginning, so it was a bit of a struggle for me to get into the story. While the premise is promising, the story delivers it in short rooms and abrupt endings. Not my cup of tea,|
||Aug 4, 2005||Starts off really well, but the remaining rooms are way too short. Check your spelling, too.|
||Nov 19, 2004||You are very imformative on pyramid history in the begining (nice!) and the stroy is also fully completed (something I have come to largely respect). However, the rooms were quite short, there weren't quite enough exciting things, and you lose just because it's daytime???|
||Apr 5, 2004||Excellent story!|
||Mar 15, 2004|