~articulate what forever smoulders~

Written by chocolateless / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Infinate	Apr 26, 2010	by Infinate on Apr 26, 2010
Dan2	Apr 5, 2010	It's aight. by Dan2 on Apr 5, 2010
apotheosis	Dec 11, 2006	Interesting story, good ideas contained within but never made it far off the ground. Also, see Chubby's comment about the u... that is simply careless. Save your internet lingo for the chatrooms. by apotheosis on Dec 11, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Mar 10, 2005	You selt the title wrong and when I saw the first option says 'u' instead of 'you' I couldn't bring myself to go on any further. I like the actual one parapgraph of what I did read, though. by ChubbyTeletubby on Mar 10, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 19, 2005	I like the way in which you leave it up to us to completely change the story rather than giving us small minor options like ...i do :/ by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
NCPolice55571	Aug 14, 2004	A cool story with different fun storylines that allow the reader to continue adding rooms from different points of the story. by NCPolice55571 on Aug 14, 2004