A Tale of Two Choices
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Juju123![]() |
May 26, 2021 | It has a lot of potential. I find that the choice strings are long enough to start roping you in to the story but then they lead to open, loose-ended rooms right when they start get fun! There needs to be more rooms posted. | |
jeffisthebest![]() |
Jan 21, 2006 | Huh? | |
michaelrayholt![]() |
Aug 13, 2005 | The thing that saved this rating from being much less is my Devil's advocate side, which thinks this idea is incredibly original and long overdue - a story actually dictated (to whatever degree that is possible) by the wanton desires of the READER. This, I think (perhaps) is the original intent of even so far back as CYOA - the reader chooses what the story is. You'd rather he was a chemist? Fine. You'd prefer the tragedy that would ensue if he was actually sent by the sister? Fine. Therefore, a seven. (whew) |
Why is it that anyone involved in a collaborative work always chooses to rate it like it's a pearl among stones? The story itself was entertaining and fairly well-written. However, most rooms were entirely too short and (in my opinion) a third party story has not NEARLY the flexibility that this story suggests. I mean, granted, we ARE on the I-S site, but certain givens should be maintained THROUGHOUT a story, not dictated entirely by the reader. The very fact that the man behind you is either a chemist or someone sent to follow you by some bratty little fat girl dependant totally on what the reader decides is preposterous.|
donteatpoop![]() |
Aug 11, 2005 | Overall, good story. However, Charles Dickens has a tendency to bore me and so does this story. In that sense, you definately hit the style right on the money. I don't mean any offense with this, as I respect Mr. Dickens for his work. I simply don't enjoy reading it. I enjoyes this story a little more than Charles' work. | |
ChubbyTeletubby![]() |
Jul 20, 2005 | Starts off promising but needs to be finished. | |
YazZMaN![]() |
Jul 5, 2005 | The idea and way the story was made in a 3rd person perspective was so original, unique, and interesting that it blew my mind. Good job. | |
sssweetie![]() |
Apr 15, 2005 | ||
AlphaDog![]() |
Dec 16, 2004 | Chuckie D. would be proud. God, a day in the life of an oppressed orphan sure can get one down around Christmas. I think I'm off to buy a Christmas goose for a crippled boy now. | |
Izzers![]() |
Apr 24, 2004 | Great idea! I'm glad you're sticking with only two choices each. It's a very interesting story! | |
CelticFrostQueen![]() |
Mar 4, 2004 | Fantastic period piece. Very authentic and historically accurate. I love it! |