The Ring of Time

Written by michaelrayholt / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Usoki		Apr 30, 2006	I cannot express how absolutely awesome this story is. The idea is awesome, the powers are balanced well, and the plot outline is definitely interesting. The bizarre sudden-death endings are a little weird, but almost make sense if you consider there must be some sort of cosmic oddity balancing the ring's power. Or maybe that's just me. Still. by Usoki on Apr 30, 2006
YazZMaN		Nov 25, 2005	Not bad man. by YazZMaN on Nov 25, 2005
donteatpoop		Sep 22, 2005	Phenomenal, Michael. Love the story, and what you've done with it. I hope you write more at a later date. Also, just as a side note; "weight sticks in the air like a banana in a Jell-O salad" is an analogy that only a true fat man would have come up with. Anyway, good shit, if I get inspired I may add on so that you can deny my entry, or take it and make it look like I knew how to spell in the first place. by donteatpoop on Sep 22, 2005
michaelrayholt		Aug 6, 2005	I came across this story again today. I'm not sure why I've abandoned it (for now) in deference to Verisimilivirate, but it might be that the latter is more fun to write (at least right now). I will get back to this later, though. At least, I'm pretty sure I will. Well, if I ever finish Verisimilivirate, there's a very good chance. (Do you have any idea how difficult it is to TYPE that title? Sheesh.) by michaelrayholt on Aug 6, 2005
AlphaDog		Dec 8, 2004	Well constructed, nice "relive the embarassment of HS angle". Personally, would have also liked it if the protagonist had the ability to go further in time, but that's a personal preference. Definitely will have to take a look a this again in a month or so once a few more choices are added. by AlphaDog on Dec 8, 2004
EnderWiggin		Feb 8, 2004	Nice story. I look forward to reading more. by EnderWiggin on Feb 8, 2004