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The Door

Written by CelticFrostQueen / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Cab		Aug 16, 2007	by Cab on Aug 16, 2007
nowyat		Sep 23, 2006	That was extremely creative and I enjoyed the fact that you could get to an end of the story, plus, still go back and try other ways. Excellent job! by nowyat on Sep 23, 2006
shuga313		Jan 3, 2006	That was very good Irelly didn't expect it to end that way excellent job. by shuga313 on Jan 3, 2006
donteatpoop		Jun 15, 2005	It was alright. I usualy like what Celtic puts out, but this one is not one of my fav's. I think I lost interest with the repetitive choice of "Keep moving forward" or "Go back". That happened for like four rooms straight. Otherwise, the story line and writing are superb. by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby		Feb 26, 2005	by ChubbyTeletubby on Feb 26, 2005
Joebwoy		Feb 12, 2005	This story is top notch and very scary. However, I didn't like the 1 choice options you had to make. It was like i was reading a scary book. by Joebwoy on Feb 12, 2005
DMOC		Jan 22, 2005	This book is pretty good, I would have to say. The one thing that makes this book a little boring to me is the part that the main character is not "You" but "Bradley." I think most people would like that... by DMOC on Jan 22, 2005
CelticFrostQueen		Jan 13, 2005	The Door is now OPEN to all who wish to add to the story. I've done this after a number of people have sent me messages saying they loved the story but wanted to see more, plus more graphics. So, I felt the best thing to do was to allow others to add their own creative ideas to the story. by CelticFrostQueen on Jan 13, 2005
Trial		Nov 15, 2004	by Trial on Nov 15, 2004
Karold		Nov 3, 2004	I want you to know that you are one of the BEST writers on this website. The entire beggining had an excellent idea to it and the writing was sure fine, so those two things were about as good as they needed to be. However the pictures were a bit 'unscary' and I DID get bored after reading a bit. You had a great idea to start with, you just needed to keep making up more eventful things during the mid-story and have scarier pictures (Though I understand these may be hard to find). KEEP WRITING by Karold on Nov 3, 2004
Victoria7		Jul 8, 2004	I love this story but hw comes your not going to continue it soon. Please its really good. can you continue it after you finish the vixin manor? Please? by Victoria7 on Jul 8, 2004