Get A date...... And Maybe Something more....

Written by Leyasu / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Floatingclouds	Nov 8, 2014	by Floatingclouds on Nov 8, 2014
Clark	Mar 7, 2013	by Clark on Mar 7, 2013
Artazansss	Sep 25, 2011	Didnt enjoy it bad story all around no plot,bad writing.I think you put very little effort into this story. by Artazansss on Sep 25, 2011
SarahMariah	Feb 24, 2011	by SarahMariah on Feb 24, 2011
EndMaster	Jan 3, 2011	Hmm, a few women really didn't like this one. One overly sensitive poppet in the other comments section (and arrogantly speaking for all the other women on the site) said that a story about disrespecting women and date rape weren't funny. If this was actually a story about such things, I'd probably give this story a higher rating. However, the story is more about some loser that is desperately trying to get a girl and failing for the most part. As far as the writing goes, it just sucks, there's no description or even comical banter to make it funny. I'll give it a couple extra points though because it pissed off a few overly emotional girls who read way more into this shitty story than everyone else did. by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
zee	Apr 4, 2009	by zee on Apr 4, 2009
Matabichos	Feb 27, 2008	by Matabichos on Feb 27, 2008
Calen	Jan 24, 2008	...Well done... you successfully used bad grammar... and created a boring story... by Calen on Jan 24, 2008
spartan008	Feb 24, 2007	by spartan008 on Feb 24, 2007
neon725	Dec 7, 2006	by neon725 on Dec 7, 2006
writer22	Oct 27, 2006	hmmm... everything has already been said about the story... no point on stating what has already been stated. Just try to develop the story alittle more. by writer22 on Oct 27, 2006
apotheosis	Aug 16, 2006	There is a little thing we in the business like to call effort. It was apparent that you lacked this in your story. by apotheosis on Aug 16, 2006
wilio	Apr 17, 2006	by wilio on Apr 17, 2006
Storm	Mar 8, 2006	Oh jesus christ, Please do better on you're next story.I could make this, if it was comeing out my backside. Most choice's and part's of the storie, didn't even make sense. by Storm on Mar 8, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 15, 2005	I can't believe I've never rated this story. I mean, such a gem among gems of absolutely mindless drivel hasn't garnered my attention yet? No! This story sucks worse than Tony Danza in an acting contest. ...<i>That's</i> gotta hurt. by michaelrayholt on Aug 15, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 6, 2005	I gave you a decent score under the assumption that you were trying to suck. If that is so then you realy hit your mark, cause this sucks. by donteatpoop on Jun 6, 2005
lalor	May 1, 2005	by lalor on May 1, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 19, 2005	I felt kinda sorry for you on negative reviews. However I respect you in the fact that you have single handedly created something which people seem to hate buuuut has gained alot of votes. You are saluted and honourably discharged. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
DMOC	Feb 1, 2005	I'm not sure I understand the point of this story? I would suggest that you could try and add some more detail to help out. One last thing, sometimes the choices seem a bit too obvious, and the reader knows it is headed for an ending. Keep writing. by DMOC on Feb 1, 2005
Ravenchild	Jan 1, 2005	Do you really think that a story about date rape and disrespecting women is funny? Not for a woman like me and all of the women at this site. by Ravenchild on Jan 1, 2005
irishdream28	Dec 4, 2004	I'm sorry I don't get it. No matter what you do you fail. I would try to contribute as one of the comments said but all the variations I went to were ended. by irishdream28 on Dec 4, 2004
Ravenchild	Nov 26, 2004	by Ravenchild on Nov 26, 2004
Karold	Nov 4, 2004	I frown upon this story and so does about- everybody else from the looks of things. Keep up the good work! by Karold on Nov 4, 2004
retlin	Nov 1, 2004	Boring. you couldnt get into it. Also you didnt describe the person. by retlin on Nov 1, 2004
jeffisthebest	Oct 11, 2004	Not enough explaining why anything happens, pretty bad. by jeffisthebest on Oct 11, 2004
jadebuddha	Sep 20, 2004	by jadebuddha on Sep 20, 2004
NamelessOne	Jul 14, 2004	Man this story sucks so bad. No one even attempts to continue it. Great idea but you people are too lazy to even spend a little time contributing to it. by NamelessOne on Jul 14, 2004
demon19000	Jul 11, 2004	by demon19000 on Jul 11, 2004
UncleZed	Feb 12, 2004	by UncleZed on Feb 12, 2004
CelticFrostQueen	Jan 28, 2004	I don't like to give any story a rating of "1" so I gave it a "2" instead. This story gives me the impression that the writer has very negative and disrespectful views towards women and relationships. by CelticFrostQueen on Jan 28, 2004
CJW	Jan 18, 2004	If this was in the "humor" category, it might have got a higher rating from me. I expected better. by CJW on Jan 18, 2004
EnderWiggin	Jan 14, 2004	This is a classic story on this site. It also gets points for being complete. However, the rooms don't contain much text. For some reason, perfectly good choices lead to bad ends and the girls name changes inexplicably in different threads. by EnderWiggin on Jan 14, 2004

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