Vixen Manor
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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imphic |
Dec 19, 2011 | I agree it is perhaps the best mature level story (except for Days in the Dorm). I hope there are more contributions in the future, since there are many loose ends that leave one wondering what happens next. | |
EndMaster |
Jan 11, 2011 | Once again some overly offended idiots in this section and the other comments section make dumb ass remarks about "perverted pictures." Christ, there isn't even anyone naked to even qualify as "perverted" let alone something like a picture of a double amputee midget fucking dead goat. Fucking prudes. And the title "Vixen Manor" should've tipped off the easily offended to not fucking read the damn story in the first place. Anyway, it's sort of a random story that should've had more structure and description, but it's one of the better sex related stories we have on here. |
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superjo16 |
Jul 16, 2010 | um, i think it would be better without the perverted pictures. just saying. | |
shadowzxv |
Jun 21, 2007 | ****ing sick pictures. I am only a kid. You must enjoy it though. One question. | |
Zericola |
Jun 18, 2007 | ||
Vesnicie |
Jun 6, 2007 | I don't see this story as much more than a man's (or a lesbian's) wet dream. Yeah, it's kind of mysterious and sexy, but at the end of the day it's just sort of...empty. I wish there were more variation to it...and more description as well. | |
KatieWroteIt |
Dec 30, 2006 | This is a fun story! I've heard a lot about you as a writer, because there aren't many girls around here. I glanced through this story once before but I didn't have time to give it the attention it deserves. Now that I've read more of it I agree with the rest you are great! | |
adept42 |
Aug 20, 2006 | ||
Marshmello |
Mar 19, 2006 | ||
Ann |
Aug 16, 2005 | Love all the really neat pictures! | |
donteatpoop |
Aug 15, 2005 | Celtic, while I respect your writing, I have to say that this is the worst thing I have read from you. Understandably, most of it is not your fault. I also understand that you have a policy to let anyone and everyone add to your story without any real screening. I urge you to rethink this course of action, as it has a tendency to destroy a potentially good story. | |
michaelrayholt |
Apr 23, 2005 | Okay, all the hot pictures aside, what is the deal with this story? It doesn't really seem to follow any real cohesive plot-line, the main character (the reader) is portrayed as a man AND a woman (this should've been more obvious), and the jumps from room to room are childishly random. If it weren't for the moving pictures (and whatever technical expertise is involved with loading one of THEM - I could only imagine), this would be a five. And if not for the pictures of hot chicks, a three. Sorry, it just seemed like a little too much pandering to the baser instincts for brownie points. |
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Joebwoy |
Mar 6, 2005 | great story... nuff said | |
CelticFrostQueen |
Dec 27, 2004 | The "main character" in this story has no set gender. You may play the main character, create a main character, or just use one that is already created. The fun thing about this sort of story is that there can be MANY "main" characters :) | |
videogameWriter |
Dec 6, 2004 | Great story but im lost. is the main character a man wonam transgender??? whats going on. one time you got a husband next thing you have a hard on....ok i guess were a transgender couple :) | |
Karold |
Nov 19, 2004 | 'Interesting' pictures, fun gameplay, and a whole platoon of contributors. NICE! | |
Trial |
Nov 15, 2004 | ||
jeffisthebest |
Sep 13, 2004 | geat pictures! Yeah! | |
Victoria7 |
Jul 8, 2004 | Its really good. you should put more 'action' into it instead of just trying to finish the tour and show all of the girls. | |
Lucid |
May 24, 2004 | This story is a lot of fun, one of the best ones I've seen. | |
MagicPen |
Apr 28, 2004 | ||
MrDuncan |
Feb 26, 2004 | This is the best story and picture set up i've read so far cool. . . | |
Rpgxper |
Jan 31, 2004 | Nice work first. Very visual, interactive, and amusing. | |
CJW |
Jan 24, 2004 | It most certainly seems well thought out. Fantastic use of pictures also. Enough of variety to keep ya interested, but not so much that it becomes unbearably random. | |
lioness1081 |
Jan 24, 2004 | ||
blazingzenmaster |
Jan 24, 2004 | Good! Has potential. keep writing! | |
NCPolice55571 |
Jan 24, 2004 | So far the tour was okay, but for the price I had to pay to get in to Vixen Manor I am unable to rate the service yet. :) | |
EnderWiggin |
Jan 23, 2004 | Wow...this story is sure something...I'm going to have to check back later and see if things continue to...um...progress! ;) |