The Quest of a Warrior Princess.

Written by bEaN99 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
jeffisthebest	Feb 16, 2006	Hmm...lesse. Pretty good overall. Certainly good length of rooms, especially for an older story. First few rooms had no choices. And paragraphs are too big, and there were numerous spelling errors. But I like the flow of this story. by jeffisthebest on Feb 16, 2006
jp33	Nov 15, 2005	by jp33 on Nov 15, 2005
michaelrayholt	Aug 7, 2005	Badly written blather - but worse than that, it's "I-am-woman-hear-me-roar"-soaked blather written for TWO DAYS back in '03. This needs to go to the bottom of the pile like yesterday. by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
funkymango	Jan 13, 2005	A well written and well thought out story. However, put a space between each line of dialogue to break it up. Lots of spelling errors and capitals missing too. by funkymango on Jan 13, 2005
Ravenchild	Oct 20, 2004	by Ravenchild on Oct 20, 2004
EnderWiggin	Jan 13, 2004	Good first story! I suggest breaking some of the longer passages into shorter paragraphs. In a setting such as this, smaller "bite size" offerings are easier to follow than long stretches of text. by EnderWiggin on Jan 13, 2004
iceprincess108	Jan 9, 2004	by iceprincess108 on Jan 9, 2004
Foolface169	Jan 7, 2004	by Foolface169 on Jan 7, 2004
SilentThunder	Jan 7, 2004	Good job man. by SilentThunder on Jan 7, 2004