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The Quest of a Warrior Princess.

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Author Rating Date Comment
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Feb 16, 2006
Hmm...lesse. Pretty good overall. Certainly good length of rooms, especially for an older story.

First few rooms had no choices. And paragraphs are too big, and there were numerous spelling errors.

But I like the flow of this story.
by jeffisthebest on Feb 16, 2006
jp33
jp33
Nov 15, 2005
by jp33 on Nov 15, 2005
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 7, 2005
Badly written blather - but worse than that, it's "I-am-woman-hear-me-roar"-soaked blather written for TWO DAYS back in '03.
This needs to go to the bottom of the pile like yesterday.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
funkymango
funkymango
Jan 13, 2005
A well written and well thought out story. However, put a space between each line of dialogue to break it up. Lots of spelling errors and capitals missing too.
by funkymango on Jan 13, 2005
Ravenchild
Ravenchild
Oct 20, 2004
by Ravenchild on Oct 20, 2004
EnderWiggin
EnderWiggin
Jan 13, 2004
Good first story! I suggest breaking some of the longer passages into shorter paragraphs. In a setting such as this, smaller "bite size" offerings are easier to follow than long stretches of text.
by EnderWiggin on Jan 13, 2004
iceprincess108
iceprincess108
Jan 9, 2004
by iceprincess108 on Jan 9, 2004
Foolface169
Foolface169
Jan 7, 2004
by Foolface169 on Jan 7, 2004
SilentThunder
SilentThunder
Jan 7, 2004
Good job man.
by SilentThunder on Jan 7, 2004

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