A Harry Potter Adventure
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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TheMaskedManiac![]() |
Jul 9, 2019 | Not Even Completed After Years Also Way Too Many Fan Pictures Seems Like You're Trying To Get Me To Fall In Love With Harry Then Tell A Story About Him I Would Give This Zero Stars If I Could | |
superjo16![]() |
Jul 16, 2010 | this is really good! | |
shiningstar2009![]() |
May 5, 2009 | love this story so far... its bin a cupple years since your last comment on this story... are you still working on it? i love to read more of it | |
Ghizzard![]() |
May 30, 2008 | ||
Matabichos![]() |
Feb 27, 2008 | ||
sunshynajc![]() |
Nov 28, 2007 | Much love and Blessings!!! :) |
Oh, WOW! I wrote this story 4 years ago! I can't believe I've even found it again! (apparantly, this site has had quite a few different URL's since I was last active!) The only bad thing about coming back 4 years later to read it is that I've been tremendously embarrassed by the number of grammatical errors I made, lol! Life is really busy right now (with Christmas and all) but maybe I'll come back and work on it a bit more after the New Year... now that I know it is still active. I hope all is well with everyone and if you ever want to get in touch with me, hit me up on MySpace! http://www.myspace.com/sunshynajc|
apotheosis![]() |
Jun 1, 2007 | -2 Originality, is just using storyline from Harry Potter, fan fiction isn't very creative -1 Harry Potter is overrated +1 Images |
Rating Rubric: (start off with a 10)|
wxp1207![]() |
May 1, 2007 | ||
bigblotbob![]() |
Feb 15, 2007 | ||
Taalgius![]() |
Oct 10, 2006 | ||
LyaeraRaizeiki![]() |
Jul 6, 2006 | good story love the pictures! | |
michaelrayholt![]() |
Aug 8, 2005 | The movies were inane, the books are puerile, and this writing actually makes me wish I were blind so I'd not have to endure it. Blech. | |
Cobra1![]() |
Jun 26, 2005 | It was very good, I think that you would make a very good author if you want. | |
sweetness![]() |
Jun 25, 2005 | This is phenomenol... i love this story, its so extensive and detailed and very fun. I cant wait until the 6th book comes out. | |
Dan2![]() |
May 11, 2005 | Really good, but please continue working on it! | |
metabad![]() |
Jan 16, 2005 | wow! I can actually picture this being a real Harry Potter book! It's awesome! Keep at it | |
Ravenchild![]() |
Nov 26, 2004 | A very well thought up story with some very fun and clever choices. Please finish it as soon as you can ;). | |
Karold![]() |
Nov 4, 2004 | This story was writen well and everything was fine. EXCEPT, I didn't like how it took the place of a future book that is already coming out and I can't get into it knowing that J.K. didn't write it. I would have liked it more if you were just a different kid at Hogwarts or something but w/e. | |
jeffisthebest![]() |
Oct 30, 2004 | Just maybe the very best story on the whole site. I enjoyed everything but severenz, I believe the author abused copyright laws | |
Ravenchild![]() |
Oct 25, 2004 | ||
ceridwynpenn![]() |
Oct 25, 2004 | ||
togeto![]() |
Sep 13, 2004 | ||
Hermione268![]() |
Jun 25, 2004 | Cool story! You'll keep writing, right? 'Cause I choose the red door and it doesn't continue from there... | |
Hermione268![]() |
Jun 23, 2004 | ||
Lucid![]() |
May 26, 2004 | This is a great story for Harry Potter fans! I love the different versions of pictures, it was really neat. They story seemed classic Harry Potter, which was what the author was going for. I hope that the author finishes this story. | |
Lozza![]() |
Mar 18, 2004 | This is a really great story! Keep it up |