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The Big 1

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
PickleKing		Mar 19, 2019	Good comic! by PickleKing on Mar 19, 2019
michaelrayholt		Aug 13, 2005	A decent premise done better later in "A Story About All Of Us". Also, any prominent worth this story may have had has been too far obscured by the italics (which, yes, are annoying) and the plethora of spelling errors, which are easily remedied. This should be relegated to the middle of the proverbial stack. by michaelrayholt on Aug 13, 2005
donteatpoop		Jun 15, 2005	I'm not so sure this story diserves the high rating that it has. I think it's high score has more to do with the fact that most people who voted also wrote in it. But whatever. That aside it doesn't seem to have a smooth flow and occasionaly has a slightly akward style. Admitedly (if that is a word) it is difficult to get a tangable story from a collaborative effort, which means this just needs a lot of editing to make it work. Good premis though, and it looks like a lot of fun to write in. I will be adding on myself. I just think it's a bit choppy and needs some work. Also the fact that everything is italicized gets on my nerves a little. by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
Soturo		Oct 31, 2004	by Soturo on Oct 31, 2004
packratt5454		May 1, 2004	This is a really Bitchin' Idea for a story...GOod work NCPOLICE by packratt5454 on May 1, 2004
CelticFrostQueen		Jan 26, 2004	This story is a fantastic idea. Growing up in Southern California gave me a crash course in Earthquake Survival 101! LOL! by CelticFrostQueen on Jan 26, 2004
CJW		Jan 16, 2004	Excellent. I'm excited to see where this is heading. Keep it up everyone! by CJW on Jan 16, 2004
lioness1081		Jan 15, 2004	by lioness1081 on Jan 15, 2004
EnderWiggin		Jan 14, 2004	I think this story is innovative and incredible, but then again, I'm a bit biased since I'm one of the writers. by EnderWiggin on Jan 14, 2004