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Not bad. You've got a good quantity of contributors, and a nicely written, coherent plotline...Not very often, when clicking the 'Random Story' button, do you come across something like this. The only problem is the fact that you deprive others of their free-will, I mean; you have to review the rooms now just to apply them to your story...I would understand this if you were busy completing it...But you're not.

Nice work. Though.
by TheCandyMan on Jul 30, 2011
by hep0005 on Feb 5, 2008
I liked the quanity, it started off very nice, and the wrting was alright. You just need to add more detail and fix up the storyline a little.
by YazZMaN on Dec 28, 2005
Wow cool no way would i do that
by SewerMagnet on Dec 25, 2005
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by JohnJohnson on Nov 27, 2005
by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
One of the best ideas for the story. Why don't you write more? They'd probably be good.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004

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