Criminals

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Jul 30, 2011	Not bad. You've got a good quantity of contributors, and a nicely written, coherent plotline...Not very often, when clicking the 'Random Story' button, do you come across something like this. The only problem is the fact that you deprive others of their free-will, I mean; you have to review the rooms now just to apply them to your story...I would understand this if you were busy completing it...But you're not. Nice work. Though. by TheCandyMan on Jul 30, 2011
hep0005	Feb 5, 2008	by hep0005 on Feb 5, 2008
YazZMaN	Dec 28, 2005	I liked the quanity, it started off very nice, and the wrting was alright. You just need to add more detail and fix up the storyline a little. by YazZMaN on Dec 28, 2005
SewerMagnet	Dec 25, 2005	Wow cool no way would i do that by SewerMagnet on Dec 25, 2005
JohnJohnson	Nov 27, 2005	<DIV ID="logo"><IMG SRC="http://www.slowart.com/slow/religion/dem-nun.jpg" WIDTH=1000 HEIGHT=1500 BORDER=3 USEMAP="#LOGO-3x3"></DIV> by JohnJohnson on Nov 27, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 19, 2005	Noice. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
jeffisthebest	Nov 5, 2004	One of the best ideas for the story. Why don't you write more? They'd probably be good. by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004