Comments & Ratings
Not bad. You've got a good quantity of contributors, and a nicely written, coherent plotline...Not very often, when clicking the 'Random Story' button, do you come across something like this. The only problem is the fact that you deprive others of their free-will, I mean; you have to review the rooms now just to apply them to your story...I would understand this if you were busy completing it...But you're not. |
Nice work. Though.
|I liked the quanity, it started off very nice, and the wrting was alright. You just need to add more detail and fix up the storyline a little.|
|Wow cool no way would i do that|
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|One of the best ideas for the story. Why don't you write more? They'd probably be good.|